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Tuesday, July 30, 2024

Reprise Review: Jezrei's Justice:Tales of Aldura by Susan Stuckey



Genre: Fantasy/Young Adult/Short Story

Description:

“Elderly and frail, Jezrei is tasked with the safety of more than twenty children when the City of Azraelis is attacked by an enemy bent on slaughter and subjugation. How can one old man hope to stand against an entire army?”

Author:

Susan Stuckey: “Currently (mostly) retired, but 'back in the day' Susan was a meek, mild-mannered, self-effacing accountant/auditor by day but after 5:00 her imagination broke free. She either played with historical stories, or in the magical World of Aldura she created.

Besides playing in fantasy worlds and/or historical times, Susan dabbles in various hobbies, loves to try new recipes, and is the servant of multiple fur-children (both feline and canine).”

To learn more please follow her on Facebook.

Appraisal:

This short story is a glowing testament for love and faith on many levels. Jezrei is an elderly Lieheiren Muhadun, a teaching priest with healing powers, of the Kalieri. He is tasked with the protection of a group of children in the Temple while the barbarian Halurdow storm the town killing and burning everything along their way. 

As the battle moves closer, Jezrei recites the history of the twin god, Azrael, who created the population and creatures of Aldura, the land on which the Kalieri live. Jezrei is able to see the hopelessness of their situation locked in the Temple. However, he is able to keep the children calm and with that peacefulness the children remind Jezrei the words spoken by Azrael as they come face to face with the Halurdow.

Ms. Stuckey has developed an intriguing and detailed history for her series. I find it a joy to be drawn into her stories. Even as heart-rending as Jezrei’s Justice could have been.

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FYI:

Although part of a series, Jezrei’s Justice can be read as a standalone

Format/Typo Issues:

I noticed no issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Approximate word count: 4-5,000 words

Friday, July 26, 2024

Review: The Customer is Always Wrong by StJohn Lennox-Kerr


 

Genre: Humor/Memoir

Description:

“Working with the general public can be a nightmare, especially in the world of computer repair. In The Customer is Always Wrong, StJohn Lennox-Kerr exposes the true horrors of customer service with a collection of painfully hilarious, and sometimes downright infuriating, stories from his time at a small computer repair shop.

Just don't lose your faith in humanity!”

Author:

I was unable to find any information about the author other than what the book says, that he is an IT professional who spent a few years about 20 years ago working in a computer repair shop.

Appraisal:

This book consists of short tales of experiences the author had working at a computer repair shop. Each section is a paragraph or two, roughly a hundred words or a bit less. Around the size of this review. (Okay, maybe more like between half to a third the size of this review.) It chronicles everything from people using the parking lot in front of the strip mall the shop was located in as a bathroom to multiple unsuccessful attempts to get something for nothing from the store to how clueless people often are about their computer or life in general. While the author eventually makes it clear that the vast majority of the customers he dealt with were reasonably nice and no problem to take care of, by the time you reach that point you can’t help but wonder how any town can have as many idiots as the one he worked in apparently does.

Most of the stories managed to get a laugh or chuckle out of me or in some cases a shake of the head, struggling to believe how the customer thought anyone would believe them or go for what they proposed. Sometimes I questioned the truth of the story as well. For example one claimed that a woman came into the store carrying a fire hydrant, set it down, said “it’s yours now,” and walked out. A fire hydrant? Really? Maybe it really happened. I’m not sure how much a fire hydrant weighs, but suppose there are people tough enough to carry one out there, assuming they came across one that wasn’t connected to the water pipe. It just seems unlikely. Or maybe he didn’t mean fire hydrant, but got the term wrong. Maybe fire extinguisher. Still strange, but more believable. I’m not sure, but my alternative possibility seems possible since this book had a ton of proofreading errors (missing words, wrong words, words that should be two words made into compound words like onetime). At times a fun read, but the proofreading issues and a ton of short repetitive stories offset much of the fun.

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FYI:

Some adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

Way, way, way too many issues with proofreading misses. It surpassed what I would find acceptable in a book twice as long.

Rating: *** Three Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 25-30,000 words

Monday, July 22, 2024

Review: Rakiya: Stories of Bulgaria by Ellis Shuman


 

Genre: Short Story Collection

Description:

“A mother pickpocketing tourists in order to support her daughter. An elderly war veteran ashamed of his actions during the Holocaust. Two brothers hunting a killer bear. A Syrian refugee working in a Sofia bakery. A femme fatale disappearing at an international writers’ conference. And two neighbors competing to see who makes the best alcoholic drink.

This collection of heartwarming and culturally illuminating stories introduces readers to Bulgaria—its majestic mountains; picturesque villages; and rich history and traditions—and leaves them wanting more.”

Author:

“Ellis Shuman is an American-born Israeli author, travel writer, and book reviewer. His writing has appeared in The Jerusalem Post, The Times of Israel, and The Huffington Post. His short fiction has been nominated for the Pushcart Prize, and has appeared in Isele Magazine, Vagabond, The Write Launch, Esoterica, Jewish Literary Journal, San Antonio Review, and other literary publications. He is the author of The Virtual Kibbutz, Valley of Thracians, The Burgas Affair, and Rakiya.”

For more about Ellis Shuman, visit his blog.

Appraisal:

I’m a fan of travel memoirs. One of the reasons I like to read them is it gives me a chance to vicariously travel to places I haven’t had the chance to travel myself. While it is made clear in multiple places that the stories in this collection are fiction, with all of them taking place in Bulgaria, these stories made me feel like I’d been there with subtle things about the culture, topography, and history of the country finding their way into the story. A few of the stories featured someone traveling from nearby Israel (the country the American-born author of these currently lives in), making me think that the author’s experiences traveling in Bulgaria had probably at least helped form the big picture of some of these. They may be fiction, but still gave me a much better feel for Bulgaria from reading them and quite entertained as well.

 

If you’re wondering about the title, Rakiya, this is an alcoholic beverage popular in Bulgaria that appears in some of the stories like a beer or a bottle of wine might pop up in stories from other places.

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Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on an advance reader copy, so I can’t gauge the final product in this area.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 50-55,000 words

Thursday, July 18, 2024

Review: The Exception by Marian Bruno


 Genre: Romantic Comedy

Description:

“A married couple struggling with infertility decide to go outside of their marriage for a consensual affair. One month, one exception and then they'll decide if IVF is right for them.

Set in the sunny hills of Silver Lake, Los Angeles where the young artists and lawless musicians roam, comes this thrilling, fun, comedic love story that'll have you chuckling in public.

Becca and Mark have been trying to have a baby for years. Technically, there's nothing wrong with them. They fight a lot, but what couple doesn't? Everyone tells them to relax and it will happen. The next logical step is in vitro, but that’s invasive and scary. If it isn’t physically meant to be, why force it? The conundrum leaves Becca feeling anxious, depressed, and alone, until the day her neighbor Macy, a wild-spirited music producer, introduces her to Heathcliff, an undeniably attractive and attentive photographer. Becca’s loins are awakened, and she wonders whether she and Mark are truly compatible. When Mark’s mom, a sociology professor, admits to swinging and preaches about the social imposition of monogamy, an idea brews: what if they went outside of their marriage?

Before taking the plunge and making a baby in a lab, they need to know, are they truly meant for one another?

They make an agreement: one month, one exception.

Will their relationship survive? Is letting go of each other, their dreams of being parents truly the secret to getting everything they’ve ever wanted? Or will their desires change completely?”

Author:

“Marian Bruno is an emerging author of humorous women's fiction novels. She used to be an actress but still considers herself a comedian. She studied at the renowned Second City Conservatory and Upright Citizen Brigade theaters, performed stand up at The Comedy Store, debuted her own one woman show and created several web series. She currently lives in Dallas with her husband, a reality tv editor, and their two vivacious children. She has thoroughly enjoyed the transition to novel writing as it has eliminated the need to do her hair and face: she'd rather be outside under a tree with a book.”

Appraisal:

This was a fun read. I liked Becca and, while I sometimes got irritated by things her husband Mark did, also understood where he was coming from enough of the time to mostly like him as well. I got mentally pulled into the struggles they were gong through and was hoping it would all work out. I also wondered if I was going to end up with an unexpected ending of some kind that I didn’t anticipate as an option. The other characters in the story were interesting and kept things lively and entertaining. While the obvious reader for this book would be a woman of child-bearing age or potentially her spouse, but as an old grandpa well past that point I still found the story compelling and good to get myself pondering how I would react if I was gong through what the characters here did.

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FYI:

Some adult language and relatively mild adult content.

Format/Typo Issues:

A small number of proofreading issues.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 95-100,000 words

Sunday, July 14, 2024

Review: Pale Blades of Moonlight by Joe Pawlowski

 


Genre: Short Story Collection/Horror

Description:

“In a dark alley in St. Paul, Minnesota, a pair of boys think they’re breaking into an abandoned secondhand store, but what they’re really entering is a nightmare from which they may never escape.

Meanwhile, in a nearby city, a caped figure appears as it does every night on the sidewalk outside the house of that old woman who neighbors believe is really a witch.

And in a rural woodland, ghouls unearth the residents of an ancient graveyard and carry off the rotting remnants for sinister purposes.

All by the silvery light of the moon.

The nine tales in this collection by award-winning writer Joe Pawlowski feature a hapless real-estate agent driven to extreme measures by his love of a severely deformed woman; a trio of farmers who discover a presence from beyond lurking in the corn; a paraplegic miss who rides the supernatural into realities far from the confines of her hospital bed; the American tourist in Mexico City who discovers the deeper meaning of the Day of the Dead; and the wise guy who learns it’s not OK to shortchange a sin eater.”

Author:

“Joe Pawlowski is a retired journalist living in the Twin Cities area with his wife, Debbie, and rescue dog, Lucy. He is a U.S. Army veteran, a secular Buddhist, a major Beatles fan, a vegan, and a lifelong student of classic horror and supernatural literature. Besides reading and writing, he enjoys music, movies and socializing with his many friends.”

For more, visit Mr Pawlowski’s website.

Appraisal:

I don’t typically read much in what could be classified as the horror genre which all of these stories are, but I like to mix things up and stretch myself sometimes by reading books that are outside my favorite genres. I decided to give this a shot and am glad I did. While a collection of short stories these are all long enough to draw the reader in, put them (at least figuratively) on the edge of their seat, and then hit the climax which is sometimes not what you thought was coming. All good reads. Most of them also take place in Minnesota, mostly in “The Cities” as the natives would say, the Minneapolis/St. Paul metro area. Those familiar with this area and its culture will feel right at home while reading these stories, doncha know, but that’s just an added bonus. Fans of horror should like this collection, even if they claim they’ve never eaten hot dish at any point in their life.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 55-60,000 words

Wednesday, July 10, 2024

Reprise Review: A Reason to Believe by Donna Fasano


 

Genre: Sweet Romance/Contemporary/Fairy Tale

Description:

“It seems like a grand idea, temporarily trading her pixie wings for a womanly form to help handsome widower Paul Roland with his baby girl. And the moment she holds the precious bairn in her arms, Fern knows true happiness for the first time.

But Fern never anticipates the dizzying emotions she feels for the man who not only needs her as a nanny, but as a woman whose passion can heal his wounded heart. Suddenly the forbidden fairy rule she gently bends because of the baby is in danger of being irrevocably broken.

Some things are meant to be…”

Author:

“USA TODAY BESTSELLING AUTHOR DONNA FASANO is a three-time winner of the HOLT Medallion, a CataRomance Reviewers Choice Award winner for Best Single Title, a Desert Rose Golden Quill Award finalist, a Golden Heart finalist, and a two-time winner of Best Romance of the Year given by BigAl's Books & Pals Review Blog. Her books have sold 4 million copies worldwide and have been published in two dozen languages. Her novels have made the Kindle Top 100 Paid List numerous times, climbing as high as #1.”

You can learn more about Ms. Fasano on her website or stalk her on Facebook.

Appraisal:

“Oh by me heart” this is an enchanting story, which begins quite by accident. Paul Roland is an author who lost his muse and his wife, Marie, when she died two years ago during a difficult childbirth. Paul has brought Katy, their daughter, to visit and spend time with Marie’s parents in Ireland. Fern is an adventurous Pixie, full of curiosity, and a strong will. She is also not wary of humans, nonbelievers are unable to see all things magical. However, Fern gets great joy from playing and entertaining babies, who still have magical sight. And this is how she gets trapped in the sleeve of Katy’s sweater then ends up on an airplane headed to New York City. As Pixie Fern contemplates her predicament in a private space away from human eyes she suddenly finds herself transformed into human form.

 

The plot moves at a nice pace as Fern and Paul settle into a working relationship with Fern as Katy’s nanny and Paul tries to get back into his writing. Until Fern starts experiencing emotions she doesn’t understand and has no idea how to deal with. The twists in the story are enlightening, poignant, and honest. The depth of character development is much deeper than I expected in this type of story. Honestly I shouldn’t have been surprised, one of Ms. Fasano’s strengths is the depth of her characters and their realistic dialogue. But, I was expecting a lighthearted tale. Silly me!

Expect to be blown away by the complexity of the human spirit you will find in Fern and Paul’s journey in A Reason to Believe.

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FYI:

A Reason to Believe is book three in A Family Forever Series.

Format/Typo Issues:

No Issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Approximate word count: 40-45,000 words

Saturday, July 6, 2024

Review: Stars Maintain Their Glow by M G da Mota


 

Genre: Historical fiction

Description:

The novel takes the form of two, inter-connected, ‘memoirs’.

The first is from neutral Portugal during World War II, between 1940-42. The second is from East Prussia, also in World War II. There is then a third section which brings the two together, and which is set during the recent pandemic. (The novel was released in 2023.) The three parts are very different.

The first immerses the reader in the world of espionage and glitterati of neutral Portugal during World War II. It is a brittle world of anxious people – the Portuguese need desperately to keep their country out of the war. Refugees stream into the neutral country, carrying what little of their lives they have been able to save. Every cafĂ©, restaurant and casino is awash with people trying to sell or buy whatever they can. Information is a valuable commodity. A newly minted spy is sent to take advantage of this, as a member of the British Embassy in Lisbon. Now moving in exalted circles, he becomes besotted with the daughter of a local aristocrat: Maria-Eduarda. He takes (and manufactures) every opportunity to be with her. She finds him mildly diverting. But it becomes apparent that they have very different expectations of the relationship.

In the second the point of view is of Herta, a young girl living in East Prussia in 1943. The hardships which the German people are enduring for the Fatherland are laid out, as bare as their food cupboards. Everyone is cold and hungry, and fed up with potatoes. Then word goes round: “the Russians are coming!” They flee. But not quick enough. This section follows Herta and her family to the end of the war and beyond. The child grows into a young woman, the nightmares recede, she goes to university to study languages, then to Berlin to work as a translator. The Berlin Wall goes up. Berlin is another city full of spies trading information …

The third part relies on a bizarre coincidence: that a descendant of a half sister of Maria-Eduarda happens to live next door to the, now elderly, widow of that new minted spy who was sent to Portugal, and who then bobbed up again in Berlin after the war. Despite the passing of so many years restitution is finally made and we learn what happened to Maria-Eduarda.

Author:

M G da Mota is Margarida Mota-Bull’s pen name for fiction. She is a Portuguese-British novelist with a love for classical music, ballet and opera. Under her real name she also writes reviews of live concerts, CDs, DVDs and books for two classical music magazines on the web: MusicWeb International and Seen and Heard International. She is a member of the UK Society of Authors, speaks four languages and lives in Sussex with her husband. She has photos and information on her website, flowingprose.com.

Appraisal:

The author is Portuguese, which informs the section set in that country delightfully. The Portuguese part of the story rattles along, the sexual avarice of the spy (Gerald Neale) for Maria-Eduarda being ramped up all the time. The denouement is genuinely shocking. The morals which underpin it feel historically accurate. Since #MeToo we don’t tend to think like that any more.

The second part of the story, set in East Prussia is a tough read. After the lushness of the first, warm, Portuguese part it is like being doused in cold water. All the characters bear such deep scars. And we are shown, graphically, why. How the family recovers after the war is a miracle in itself. However, when Herta moves to Berlin her life becomes tolerable, then pleasant.

Da Mota is ambivalent as to how much of the book is based on facts. I cheated and read the explanatory notes at the end early on. This was because the story is, from the start, bracketed with interventions from Valeria, Maria-Eduarda’s descendant. And for some time it was not clear to me who she was nor why they were there. You may wish to do the same. It does slightly undermine the ‘memoir’ claim – which is a pity, because the first two-thirds of the novel work well as such. Throughout, Da Mota’s prose holds a hint of veracity (odd things are included, odd things are left out) as if she is at times concerned to be truthful to her sources. Both tales feel as though they have been translated in from other languages. It reads very much as a novel of its time, and of Mitteleuropa.  

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FYI:

Graphic descriptions of sexual violence occur in the two historical parts.

Format/Typo Issues:

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: Judi Moore

Approximate word count: 135-140,000 words

Tuesday, July 2, 2024

Review: Those We Do Not See by Angie Gallion


 

Genre: Thriller, Suspense, Women’s Fiction

Description:

“Britany Adams begins a rapid downward spiral after she’s involved in an accident that results in a fatality. Within weeks, she loses her home, her job, and her dignity. Struggling with guilt and living on the streets, she is plunged into a gritty world filled with danger and despair.

While investigating the crash, Officer Cliff Rathborn never dreams that he will be the last person to speak to Britany before a missing person report is filed. While assisting in the search for Britany, Cliff realizes he has not dealt with his own mother’s disappearance when he was a child. He begins to reconcile with the fact that he may never know what happened to his mother.

To discover Britany’s whereabouts, Cliff needs to enter the shadows and look into the faces of those that most people refuse to see, while Britany must survive long enough to be found.”

Author:

“Angie Gallion has been a stage actor, an anti-money laundering investigator, a photographer, and a paralegal. She has lived in Illinois, California, Missouri, and Georgia and has traveled to Greece, the Dominican Republic, Scotland, and Ireland. She dreams of traveling when her children are grown, and she and her husband can set out into the world. She is currently rooted outside of Atlanta Georgia with her husband, their children, and their two French Bulldogs.”

For more, check out her website.

Appraisal:

This is a great story with multiple levels for the reader, depending on how much you want and are open to taking in. That’s kind of vague, so I’ll explain.

The first and most obvious is the obvious thriller or suspense story on the surface. Britany’s life spins out of control when a car accident happens and results in the death of the driver of the other car. Britany isn’t blameless, but just how responsible she is for what happened is far from clear. Her guilt about the accident and repercussions in her life cause a rapid downward spiral resulting in her living on the street.

The second level is going beyond Britany as the reader considers how realistic what Britany experienced is. We meet some of the other homeless people Britany associates with and ponder how we think we would deal with such situations or what we think real people should do in that situation. We see Britany interact with others who make questionable decisions because they appear to be the only option to improve their situation. If this doesn’t get you at least thinking about some of society’s issues, you aren’t paying attention. (Or maybe just don’t want to go there.)

I’m glad I read this book and highly recommend you do the same.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

A small amount of adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on an advance reviewer copy, so I can’t gauge the final product in this area.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 65-70,000 words