Thursday, November 21, 2013

Aftermath-Episode 2 / Edwin Stark


Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Genre: Zombie / Apocalypse

Approximate word count: 20-25,000 words

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Author:

Edwin Stark was born in Caracas, Venezuela on the edge of a rain forest in South America. He grew up dreaming crazy tales and eventually started writing them down. English is not his first language. You can read more about him on his blog or Facebook.

Description:

In this second installment of Aftermath, Danny Cargill, his father Andrew, Jessica Ferguson, and Carl Lomax, make their way to Camp Haiberry, after being expelled from Camp McGregor, through zombie infested territory. They were hoping for an uneventful trip. Little did Danny or the others know that along the way they would meet a strange young girl who would change everything.

Appraisal:

As our small group makes their trek to Lomax's home, Camp Hailberry, they encounter small groups of zombies that they easily defeat. After they make it to the broken down truck and are able to make temporary repairs they expect the rest of the trip to be uneventful. Of course the repair doesn't last long and they find themselves hiking and camping the last twenty miles.

During the night Carl and Danny notice zombies are starting to gather, however, they are staying several yards away. In the forefront of these zombies is a young girl that looks dirty but uninfected. Danny tries to communicate with her to no avail. As they make their way on to Camp Hailberry the following day they watch behind them as hordes of other zombies gather to follow the young girl who is following them.

Edwin Stark has twisted his zombie tale somewhat and changed all the rules in this installment. The survivors have already noticed that not all zombie bites infect the living as it has in the past. What happens once the zombie virus mutates? This one seems to have run it course and is leaving its victims changed in a different way. It will be interesting to see where Mr. Stark is going with this theory. So, here I find myself awaiting another zombie book. How did that happen?

FYI:

There was one F-bomb dropped, otherwise the language was clean.

Format/Typo Issues:

There were a few more than a small amount of proofing errors that needed to be fixed. A few missing or extra words however most were wrong word choices because of the language barrier that Mr. Stark deals with.

Rating: **** Four stars

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Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Snake Plant / Laura L Sullivan


Reviewed by: BigAl

Genre: Middle Grade/Horror/Comedic Fiction/Short Story

Approximate word count: 3-4,000 words

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Author:

Under the pen name Sullivan Lee as well as her own name, Laura L Sullivan is the author of several traditionally published books in multiple genres. The former social worker, newspaper editor, and deputy sheriff is now also self publishing her short stories.

Description:

“Oskar wants a pet snake more than anything. His cold, unkind mother refuses, but finally says that if he can take care of a plant for six months, she'll let him have a snake. Little does Oskar know that she plans to sabotage his plant. But this plant is special – and her efforts to kill it only make it stronger!”

Appraisal:

Snake Plant is a fun little story for young and old alike. Oskar wants a pet and after listening to his mother’s objections to dogs, cats, and the other obvious choices he thinks he’s hit on the perfect animal, a snake. But Mom’s got other plans. For any kid whose parent’s rules seem to go too far (or any adult who was once one of those kids) this story should be very easy to relate to.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.


Rating: **** Four stars

Tuesday, November 19, 2013

The Tree of Mindala / Elle Jacklee


Reviewed by: Michael Thal

Genre: Fantasy/Science Fiction/YA

Approximate word count: 95-100,000 words

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Author:

Elle Jacklee became interested in writing for children as a child when she first read classics like The Wizard of Oz and The Chronicles of Nania. A nature lover at heart, Jacklee understands the delicate balance of Mother Nature’s work. It is that miracle that inspired her to create the world of Wunderwood and The Tree of Mindala. The author lives in Wisconsin with her husband and two sons.

Description:

Miranda Moon is a precocious eleven-year-old with an imagination that would be the envy of any novelist. Her popular younger brother, Marcus, is resentful about missing a huge Halloween party just because of his sister’s tall tales. She was suspended from school, so their parents whisked them away. Now they have to spend Halloween in their grandparents’ dusty old cabin rather than Marcus attending a coveted Halloween party. The boring weekend quickly turns exciting when Miranda uncovers a snow globe under a loose floorboard. When she turns the object upside down, “as one can’t help doing with water globes,” darkness falls around her, a chill sweeps the room, and the floor evaporates into cold, damp ground. Miraculously, Miranda and Marcus are transported to the magical land of Wunderwood.

Appraisal:

Elle Jacklee brings to her readers a very creative new world that rivals Oz or Nania. Wunderwood is a botanical wonderland filled with exciting characters with magical abilities. Miranda and her brother soon learn that they have family in this mystical place, and an evil uncle bent on conquering it, even if it takes destroying all of the beautiful forest to do so.

The author does a wonderful job in character and plot development. Her only editorial weakness was the inability to cut scenes that didn’t advance the plot. Other than that, The Tree of Mindala is a worthwhile read for any reader of any age who enjoys a combination of fantasy and science fiction.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.


Rating: **** Four stars

Monday, November 18, 2013

Traveling Through Time, A Guest Post from Mia Grace, Author of Correlation


Do I believe in time travel?

It happens to me whenever I work on a novel.

Each of my books draws on some element from my own life—a place, a person, or an event. Writing about that person or place, or describing that event, sends me back in time to relive and re-experience it.

When things really get rolling, the magic begins, and I lose track of time. I’m back in the living room of my childhood home, touching the roughness of the old horsehair couch, watching the tubes light up in the floor-model Philco radio, listening to the scratchy seventy-eight RPM records that drop with a clunk from the center stalk of the record player.

I’m on a college campus in the nineteen sixties, participating in an anti-Vietnam War rally. Fear, anger, and desperation fill the air as a crowd of young people stands together to protest the meaningless sacrifice of lives.

I’m with my large, boisterous multigenerational Sicilian family, seated around a huge custom-made table in my grandparents’ brightly lit basement kitchen, steeped in the aromas of freshly made marinara sauce and deep-fried calamari, surrounded by noisy relatives laughing, talking, and admonishing their children to quit fooling around and sit up straight.

I’m in my old neighborhood, riding my bike on the pockmarked concrete street, its cracks filled with bumpy black asphalt. Elm trees line both sides of the street, their graceful, arching branches meeting overhead to form a shady green canopy as I coast down a hill toward the stop sign at the bottom, hoping my handbrakes will work and I won’t skid out. The wind cools my face and the thrill of heading out for an adventure fills me with anticipation.

It may be August in real time, but I can be transported to the holiday season in New England—the exhilarating cold of a winter night, the muted peacefulness as snow blankets my part of the world, the excitement of preparing for company and gift-giving and sharing fantastic food.


Writing transports me to another time and place, and when all goes well, I’m able to share that experience with the reader. If I can give you the sense of having been to another place and time, either real or imagined, and even if only for a little while, then I’ve accomplished what I wanted to do—to share with you my experience of traveling through time.

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Sunday, November 17, 2013

The Rapist / Les Edgerton


Reviewed by: Keith Nixon

Genre: Crime/Thriller

Approximate word count:45 -50,000 words

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Author:

Les Edgerton is the author of fifteen books. He is an ex-con and served two years for a single charge of burglary, reduced from 182, two strong-arm robberies, an armed robbery, and a count of possession with intent to deal. Today, he's completely reformed. Prior to this Les served in the U.S. Navy as a cryptographer during the Cuban Crisis and the beginning of the Vietnam War.

After making parole, Les obtained a B.A. from Indiana University and then received his MFA in Writing (Fiction) from Vermont College. He teaches workshops nationwide on writing. Born in Texas, Les now lives in Indiana with his family.

You can learn more about the author at his blog.

Description:

Meet Truman Ferris Pinter, a self-confessed rapist and murderer, currently residing on death row, hours away from his execution.

Appraisal:

If you’ve read the author bio you’ll probably appreciate that I approached The Rapist with a degree of trepidation – Les Edgerton is one scary dude. In addition the subject matter would probably be difficult. The cover, of a woman’s face, eyes sightless, is haunting. 

And I was right, it isn’t an easy read. It’s one of those stories you push away after finishing it, then pull it back again and look at it in a whole new light. Clearly Edgerton likes to jolt his readers. In fact, afterwards I felt a bit grubby having been in the mind of the main character, Truman Ferris Pinter, for so long. 
Socially inept (a gross understatement) and incredibly self-important, Truman is a strange guy. At the outset we meet Truman in prison, he’s on death row having been found guilty of the rape and murder of a young woman. Through the initial part of the story Truman admits and even justifies his actions in a quite unique voice. He feels morally justified in his actions because of who she is and who he is. He is a class above.
Here’s an example from the outset:

He will inhale you, devour you, eat the pulp of your soul and spit out the husk. Behind his eyes lies nothing save the fevered light of unholy candles.

And this is Truman describing himself. Whilst awaiting his sentence for death in a matter of hours time (which adds another layer of tension) he recounts the situation which put him there and we learn about Truman’s life and experiences – some of which are strange – before he goes through a personal change. I won’t say more, you’ll need to discover these for yourself.

Should I feel sorry for Truman? Really I shouldn’t, but eventually I became drawn to the oddball. It was a strange experience.

The writing is very sharp, the prose as rich and wealthy as a billionaire. I stayed up late for three nights in a row to finish The Rapist, only going to bed when I literally couldn’t keep my eyes open, it’s that compelling a story. 

I haven’t picked up anything quite like The Rapist before. I probably never will again.

FYI:

A rape scene but not overly graphic.

Format/Typo Issues:

None.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Saturday, November 16, 2013

Hoppin' The Boxes

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Welcome to my stop for Hoppin the Boxes Today I'll be featuring Faith Mortimer
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Faith Mortimer and the Diana Rivers Mystery Set
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A DIANA RIVERS Boxed Set of 3 Murder Mystery Suspense Novels ~ Purchase Now: Amazon § Barnes § iTunes § Kobo
Welcome to the 1st Diana Rivers, Mystery Suspense Murder Boxed Set featuring the first three books in the series, ‘The Assassins’ Village’, ‘Children of the Plantation’ and ‘The Surgeon’s Blade’. All three books are Amazon bestsellers. Diana Rivers our heroine is a writer, sometime actor and amateur sleuth and loves nothing more than getting embroiled in the middle of a mystery – especially MURDER! ‘The Assassins’ Village’: Book 1 When an expatriate theatrical group gather to discuss their next play there will be murder. A blackmailer stalks their picturesque Cypriot village. Unbeknown to each other they all attempt to find solutions to their problems. Some believe it lies in murder. Can they find the blackmailer? And can they find that all important ‘little black book’ – the chronicle of their misdeeds. A body is discovered and Diana turns detective. After the police get involved one of her suspects is found hanged – is this another murder or suicide? A visit to a villager’s home uncovers an ancient assassin’s device. Could this be the murder weapon? Is it possible that an assassin lives at the heart of this formerly peaceful and idyllic mountain village? The villagers are riven with jealousies, rivalry, sexual tension and illicit affairs. Love, hate, murder and high drama all feature in this classic detective story. With a list of suspects, some dramatic twists and the odd red herring, the reader is left guessing until the final curtain. ‘Children of the Plantation’: Book 2 After discovering the truth surrounding the bloody murders in, ‘The Assassins' Village’ our sexy, feisty sleuth and heroine, Diana Rivers and her partner Steve, decide they deserve a holiday. Relaxing at their luxurious, palm fringed plantation hotel in lush, tropical Malaysia; things don't quite work out as they imagined. Diana is approached by the hotel owner, the enigmatic & secretive Miss Chalcot to take a look through some old family documents and help find a solution to put right a dreadful forty-year old misdoing. Diana is given free rein to pursue the mysterious past of the family and discover what lies behind the dark stories. Diana enters into a world of the 1950's and 1960's, where lies, deceit, illicit love, jealousies and perhaps murder all feature. What really happened all those years ago? Who was responsible for events that shocked the whole family and plunged it into despair? And what is the real story behind the façade? ‘The Surgeon's Blade’: Book 3 Nursing sister, Libby Hunter wakes up in hospital with amnesia after a traumatic sailing accident. She finds a stranger sitting by her bedside who claims to be her fiancé. Libby remembers nothing about him. Returning home, Libby finds herself in great danger when her house is broken into. Who is the intruder and what does he want? Is this connected with a series of attacks on nurses in London and Southampton? Will Libby be the latest targeted victim? Distressed Libby turns to helicopter pilot, Robert for help and understanding, but is he as respectable and kind as he appears to be? Is her so-called fiancé, Nigel trustworthy? The night time intrusion into Libby's house sets in motion a downwards spiral of cataclysmic and terrifying events, culminating in Diana Rivers stepping in to help solve the case in this chilling mystery.  
Character bio: Diana Rivers, amateur sleuth
...Some might say she's inquisitive - and some will say she's just downright nosy! I'm told she's feisty, tenacious and sexy. She's neither Miss Marple nor Jessica Fletcher. She's her own woman. Bright, forty-ish and with a mind of her own. Since her childhood she's often found herself in tricky situations, sometimes real danger, but somehow she's always come out squeaky clean - so far...
Diana lives in an old stone-house set somewhere in Cyprus and writes books; historical fiction, thrillers, action and romantic suspense among other things. She doesn't go looking for trouble but somehow… it always finds her. Diana's interest with all things mysterious, involving human and sometimes not so human things started when she was a girl, at a boarding school in Singapore. She enjoys a good mystery and often finds herself siding with the underdog - she sums up most situations with the word; retribution. Diana likes to fight alongside the underdog, that person in the mystery or adventure who is having a hard time - often through no fault of their own. She understands everyone is human and has faults and quirks that are different from the next person. Diana too is human and makes her own mistakes - sometimes bad ones. Traces of Diana can be found in different periods of her life, when she trod the boards, was at school or just a bare mention when she immediately grasps the answer to a query one of her friends asks her.
About Faith Mortimer
Faith Mortimer is a wife & mother, dividing her time between Hampshire, UK & Cyprus. Since childhood, she dreamed of writing novels which readers would love, and spent many hours writing short stories which she read to her sisters. Later her dreams were put on hold while she focused upon her family and careers as a nurse and later overseeing a string of travel and sport related companies. Born in Manchester and educated in Singapore, Malaya and Hampshire, England. A Registered nurse that changed careers in her later years to oversee a number of travel and sport related companies.
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Excerpt from ‘The Assassins’ Village’: Book 1 Purchase Now : Amazon § Barnes § iTunes § Kobo
He awoke confused and disorientated, barely able to breathe, his throat obstructed. He heard a voice; soft and persistent, close to his ear. Struggling against the cotton wool seemingly stuffed in his brain, he forced open his eyes. The man squinted at the blinding light. He knew he was lying down. The agonising pain in his left leg intensified when he attempted to move it from its impossible angle. A pain as sharp as a new razor blade cut through him. He shrieked in alarm, realising his leg was broken.The whispered voice spoke again. The man looked around him in sudden panic. Who and what was all this? And why couldn’t he function properly? He tried to speak, to answer the phantom voice, but his tongue couldn’t form the words. A sudden movement and a shadow fell across his face… Raising his head, his eyes widened as he remembered being pushed over the limestone cliff into the vineyard below. But that explained nothing. Struggling, the injured man raised himself into a sitting position to confront the shadow. A firm hand, calloused and strong, pushed him back down. ‘Keep still. You can’t get up.’The man recognised an accent. A trickle of blood rolled down between his dry, tortured lips and a thread of fear crept through him.The shadow spoke in a rasping voice. ‘Soon you will see. You must pay for all you’ve done.’ The shadow hissed in his face. A breath that was hot and sour. As the shadow bent closer the man gave a start and recoiled; he recognised his assailant. A deep chill spread through his gut despite the heat of the day. In terror, he fought at the cords binding his wrists. With desperation he cried out, spluttering through the soiled coarse cloth in his cheeks. The core of dread in his stomach spread like a foul growth of malignancy. His eyes pleaded mercy.The shadow gave a laugh, shrill and mirthless. ‘Shall I forgive you? No. I think not. Never once have I seen you give kindness. You treat all like dogs at your feet. Well, you are dirt beneath mine.’ Abruptly the shadow withdrew and walked over to a low stonewall. It returned, carrying a pair of gloves and an old leather bag. The assailant drew on the gloves, before untying a thong at the neck of the receptacle. The man watched, beads of sweat sliding down his face, then he writhed in horror, as he realised what was being thrust before him. He twisted his head aside, gagging at the revolting sight; yelling deep in his throat. ‘No! No! Please! Oh God help me!’ His words were garbled and lost.‘This is all your doing. Yours! Did you never think how you hurt me?’As the victim stared with revulsion his throat gagged and he retched. Stomach churning, he felt a warmth spread beneath his loins. Screaming in panic he tried to pull away from the calm face of his attacker, only to realise that it was futile. The end, when it came, was swift, a thrust and a sharp twist. At first, there was no wound; then the blood flowed and grew like a blossom of deep red peonies spilling their petals to hiss upon the hot honey-coloured rock. Satisfied, the assassin bent down, removed the pretty blue scarab ring from the victim’s finger, placed it in the bag and walked away without another look.But of course, this is a later scene – let the play begin…
Excerpt from ‘Children of the Plantation’: Book 2 Purchase Now : Amazon § Barnes § iTunes § Kobo
Opening the kitchen door, Hermione spotted a vixen standing near the refuse bin. She clapped her hands, and it shot through the hedge at the bottom of the garden. Hermione's heart was thudding in her breast as she considered what next to do. Casting a look around, she gave thanks that the clouds scudding overhead made it a dark night. This had to be done in complete privacy. Giving herself a mental shake, she crossed the damp grass to the shed and picked up a spade. A clod of earth still clung to the sharp blade from where she had been digging in her vegetable patch earlier that afternoon. It seemed such a long time ago now. She paused, still not completely certain she was doing the right thing. Making up her mind, she walked over to the newly turned earth. The air smelt fresh after the rain shower, and a light breeze blew the mixed garden scents her way while she dug. The hole was to be small but deep, especially as she had just driven the fox off. Satisfied, she stood back and peered down into the soft loamy material, a sorry place for such a pathetic bundle. Sick at heart, but knowing they had no choice, Hermione laid down her spade and walked back into the kitchen. She picked up the tightly wrapped package and carried it outside; it weighed no more than a couple of pounds as she gently laid it down into the hole. Covering it with fresh earth, she scattered pebbles around and knelt on the grass. Had there been any other choice? Whatever were they going to tell him when the time came? Trailer for Children of the Plantation
Excerpt from ‘The Surgeon's Blade’: Book 3 Purchase Now : Amazon § Barnes § iTunes § Kobo
Playing this game was a major enjoyment. It had been played many times before, and this time, it was proving even more of a thrill. The watcher spotted her immediately. She was seated at a table for two, and from the number of times she had glanced at her watch, it was obvious she had been stood up by her date. The watcher was cautious by nature and covertly observed the woman from a chosen seat which was half-hidden in the shadows behind a potted palm. She was one of those women in their thirties who looked attractive in a quiet, unassuming way and could have been stunning if she had spent more time over her hairstyle and make-up. Her dress was an off-the-rail model, most probably from one of the departmental stores and in a different colour would have enhanced her appeal. Unfortunately, the dull fabric did nothing for her hair and skin colouring. The watcher had seen her many times around the hospital and knew who she was. She came across as confident and sure of herself as far as her work was concerned. She now sat alone and forlorn, casting wistful glances at those couples who sat with bent heads sharing a whisper and promise of the night to come. Minutes later, she answered a call on her mobile phone with nervous girlish pleasure, but her face paled in distress as she replaced it into her evening bag. The watcher knew instantly how easy it was going to be and smiling coldly, raised a glass with a slight movement in her direction and offered a silent toast. Why waste time yearning over a date that would never show when your prayers have been answered, dearest girl, the watcher demanded silently. From now on, you’re mine, all mine. Chapter 1 Three o’clock. The dead hour. It was the rain lashing against the window that woke Libby. Cursing under her breath, she glanced at her clock on the bedside cabinet and contemplated the day ahead: nearly three-thirty. She must be mad! At the end of June, the weather really should be fine. ‘Flaming June’, they called it. Well, there hadn’t been too much flaming lately. This was the fourth day in a row of seemingly endless downpours. Dratted weather! Well, she was committed to today’s race, and there was nothing she could do but put on a smiling face. Less than an hour later, showered and dressed, Libby had a quick breakfast of toast and tea and headed for the door. Her cat followed her and meowed loudly as Libby put on her jacket. The fluffy pale ginger cat was obviously thinking her mistress was quite mad, not only for disturbing her slumber at this untimely hour, but for leaving the flat on such a cold and wet day. She sat on the rug looking quite put out. “Okay, Rommie, I’ll see you tonight. Don’t fret. The automatic feeder is primed to open for your tea, and I’ve left you plenty of biscuits in the meantime. If you feel you can bring yourself to use the cat flap, please do, because I don’t want any little accidents before I return.” Libby reached down and gave Rommie a final stroke, thinking the cat had the right idea. The morning so far looked awful. She had a quick look round her flat, mentally going through what she would need for the day: wet weather gear, life jacket, and sailing gloves. She noticed the framed degree certificate upon the living room wall. ‘Olivia Hunter, registered nurse.’ It was a long time since she’d been called Olivia; not since her parents had been killed. With a shrug, she picked up her bag and locked the door behind her. Despite the foul weather, she was excited. Being chosen as part of the crew on a fast yacht for the Isle of Wight’s prestigious ‘Round the Island Race’ had a certain cachet, and she had been delighted when Nigel had chosen her.
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Friday, November 15, 2013

The House on Persimmon Road / Jackie Weger


Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Genre: Romance / Ghost Story

Approximate word count: 75-80,000 words

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Author:

Jackie Weger “…began writing romance novels in the 1980's while living in a small farming town in Texas and is an award-winning contemporary romance writer. She published sixteen novels with Harlequin Books and is now bringing her five-star favorites to the e-book community.”

To learn more about Ms. Weger visit her blog and/or her Facebook page, she loves to chat with readers.

Description:

“Lottie Roberts is restless and lonely. She's been sitting on her bones for decades, waiting for her ticket to heaven until... Justine Hale and her family take up residence in Lottie's two-hundred-year-old plantation house.”

Trying to make a fresh start after her husband leaves her Justine moves her family to Alabama. Which include not only her eleven year-old son and eight year-old daughter, but also her bankrupt mother and sharp-tongued ex-mother-in-law.

Justine needs help and Lottie is of a mind to provide it. But before Lottie can say squat and Justine even unlocks the front door, Tucker Highsmith shows up to steal her thunder. His dark eyes, lazy grin, and sexy Alabama drawl coupled with the dern braggart's Mr. Fix-it talents just might be the answer to all of Justine's problems. Or maybe not...”

Appraisal:

With Ms. Weger's easy going writing style you are able to get a clear picture of the characters in this story from the onset. Justine is overwhelmed with the responsibility of raising her children and refereeing between her two mothers who nitpick at each other constantly. I found it easy to sympathize with Justine, she is smart, level-headed, and practical. She has her work cut out for her. 

Her mother, Pauline, was pampered high-society until the death of her husband and her livelihood is now tied up in bankruptcy court. In all of her aristocratic ways, she too is trying to find her place in the world. Now in her sixties, she wants to learn to drive a car and get a job. While Agnes Hale, Justine's ex-mother-in-law, sets her sights on a couple of different prizes.

Tucker Highsmith is their closest new neighbor. He lets himself get pulled into helping this eclectic family move in and settle against Justine's wishes. Tucker is drawn to Justine more than any woman he has ever met, but has enough responsibility of his own to deal with so he has no intention of getting involved with Justine. However both find themselves expertly manipulated by Pauline. 

Lottie, our resident ghost, wants her body back.  Her dearest wish is to be alive once again, to be whole, and be able to be seen and heard again. She is pretty sure she is not all the way dead because no one ever found her bones and she was never properly buried. She concocts a harebrained plan she is sure will work to bring her back from betwixt and between. 

This story is an enjoyable three-ring circus. The human characters in this story are believable, the conversations and the dilemmas ring true. It was fun to watch Tucker and Justine work through and break down the barriers each had constructed to protect themselves from further heartbreak. The plot moved smoothly and had a good pace. Ms. Weger's stories seem to have a different sort of flavor to them than your typical romance novel that I have found I enjoy.

Format/Typo Issues:

I do believe this story would benefit from another round of proofing. I found a small number of proofing errors.


Rating: **** Four Stars

Thursday, November 14, 2013

Hush / S.L. Baum

This review is the second half of a doubleshot. If you missed it, BigAl reviewed the same book this morning.


Reviewed by: Fredlet

Genre: YA/Dystopian

Approximate word count: 45-50,000 words

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Author:

Ms Baum enjoyed sci-fi books and movies as a kid. In her teens she began reading supernatural/paranormal novels. Other interests include crafting, baking, part time teaching, and most importantly being a wife and mother. She is the author of The Immortal Ones series. This book is the second novel in the Lush series.

For more, visit her blog or facebook page.


Description:

“Bluebell’s Citizen Brand is like no other. Because she is LUSH, she’s turned into a public figure – a perfect example of a Concord Citizen, a goal for the next generation. She tries to embrace her fate, but the more she learns about Concord and The Council, the less she trusts in everything she’s been told her whole life. 

After discovering that Aspen is not her real mother, Bluebell realizes she has little chance of finding the woman who gave birth to her. She also suspects someone is tampering with her memories, and knows that she must discover the truth about Concord before the people she loves are completely erased from her mind.” 

Appraisal:

I really like how the first chapter pulled me right back into the story, quickly reviewed what had happened so far, and began to advance the story further. It also made me long to go back and reread Lush again. So I did! On my first reading, the ending of Lush had me reading so fast to see what was going to happen, then the same thing happened with Hush.

Ms Baum expertly sets up Bluebell’s lack of trust in her family. Their actions, or lack thereof, and the articles she reads from the secret tablet, along with her dreams, set the stage for her suspicions about who she is and what the real goals of Concord and The Council might be. Her descriptions of the Gala and Ambassador Tour, from fashion to settings to menus, painted a very vivid picture of the events and made me hungry.

I developed very strong feelings for some of the characters. Aspen’s secrets and controlling behavior creeps me out. I had those same feelings for Weaver from Medical in Concord One. His desire to so closely observe Bluebell while touring One made me uncomfortable about the reasons for his interest. I really enjoyed Gill, the chauffeur for the trip, and found his role to be intriguing. I admire Bluebell’s love and protectiveness for her friends; especially her developing relationship with Thorn.

The more I find out about Concord, the more skeptical I feel about The Council’s need to mandate, regulate, and control the Citizens. All the drugs taken or administered and need for perfectness seem more sinister than perfect. I look forward to seeing how Bluebell will handle her desire to be a perfect example of a Concord Citizen with the knowledge she learns about Concord and the world outside. Concord Reigns? I am not so sure, and wonder if Bluebell will be able to hush up about what she finds out.

FYI:

“Disclaimer: Hush is part of the Lush Series – but it's more like a Serialized Television Show. It is the second novel in the series, and it answers some questions from Lush, but it asks a lot more. Think of the Lush series like Lost or The Vampire Diaries or Heroes... and not so much like E.R. or Fringe or House. The final novel is due February 2014.” 

Format/Typo Issues:

I read a beta copy first, then skimmed through the released edition and found no significant issues.


Rating: ***** Five Stars

Hush / S.L. Baum

This is the front end of a doubleshot. This afternoon, look for Fredlet's take on the same book.


Reviewed by: BigAl

Genre: YA/Dystopian

Approximate word count: 45-50,000 words

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Author:

A former high school math teacher, S.L. Baum now works as a substitute elementary school teacher, chauffeur for her kids, and novelist. She lives with her family in the Southwestern United States. Her The Immortal Ones series has four books, thus far. Her book Lush began a dystopian serial for young adults with Hush as the continuation.

Description:

Hush is the continuation of the serial which began with Lush. In this installment Bluebell has a kind of coming out as the “Lush Ambassador.” She then does a tour of each of the four regions of Concord, the fictional dystopian world where the story takes place. As Bluebell visits each Concord region she learns more about the world she’s living in as well as more about things she’s not meant to find out, including her past.

Appraisal:

In my review of Lush, the first installment in this dystopian serial, I discussed how its world was unlike a typical dystopia. The primary difference is that the standard of living is high, lacking the squalor and poverty of a normal dystopia. But like most dystopias, life is far from ideal. In Concord, life appears good, with a healthcare system that provides a long, good life. However, with the government also making many life decisions for the people, maybe it isn’t so good after all.

As the story continues we, through Bluebell, begin to see the chinks in the armor. Maybe some of the positives about Concord are only illusion. As more information comes out about Bluebell’s mother, Bluebell is given clues to some of Concord’s faults. When I finished Lush, I was interested in seeing where this serial was headed, both because I found the world interesting and wanted to see what happened to the characters. But I didn’t feel fully invested. This installment changed that.

Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on a beta copy which means I’m unable to grade the final product in this area.


Rating: ***** Five stars