Monday, July 21, 2025

Review: Neodymium Apocalypse, Part 1 by Jen Finelli, MD


 Genre: Space opera

Description:

The macro premise here is that the galaxy in which the book takes place is being pushed towards heat death by Superbeings (who may be gods, or may be from another dimension). A small band of very young warriors is trying to prevent this. For much of the book some of them do not know that is what they are doing. But contact with a child-Messiah space-lemur brings them round. (That last sentence might be a spoiler, but you have to agree, it was too tempting to leave out.)

Author:

Finelli says of herself “I’m a physician and injured adventurer … I often write fantastical science fiction with a real life military, medical, or combat edge. When I’m not doing that, I play with trauma and pain and hope.” Of this Neodymium series she says it is, “something like a manifesto about hope, independence, diversity, and the question of suffering with free will.”

Her writing influences include C.S. Lewis, Kevin J. Anderson, James Beamon, and Alicia McCalla (with whom she wrote the SUPERHERO MEGA ANTHOLOGY). She podcasts. She has some 25 titles on Goodreads, a number of which are set in this Neodymium universe. However, her most popular title is Bleed.

She says you're welcome to download some of her stories for free at byjenfinelli.com/you-want-heroes-and-fairies, or join her quest to build a mobile indigent clinic for the forgotten at patreon.com/becominghero. Jen's a practicing MD, FAWM candidate, and sexual assault medical forensic examiner – but when she grows up, she wants to be a superhero.

Appraisal:

This is a book with interesting things to say about the way we live now, and the ways in which that might change in the future. It is wise about personal and societal gods, and how individuals and populations relate to them. It has interesting things to say about feminism, family, personal identity, and religion. As here:

‘“Is Njandejara [most people’s god of choice] angry with us?” Lark asked finally.
“You want him to be angry at those who’ve wronged or failed you,” Joshua said. “What should he do for the people you’ve wronged or failed?”
“That is a good question,” Lark said.’

Isn’t it though.

There are a lot of great ideas in this book.

The novel has a large cast (a list of whom are given at the back of the book, with no signpost to it at the beginning …). A number of important characters have pseudonyms and/or nicknames. Sometimes more than one.

There is a substantial subplot involving a small group of fellow combatants and/or brothers of Jaika, one of the major characters. They have been enslaved. Every so often Jaika bemoans the fact that saving the galaxy is delaying her freeing them. Every so often we step out of the plot (which is moving along very nicely) to visit them in their captivity, which I have to say I came to resent. Their situation does not change, as the book is galloping along elsewhere. This (rather baggy) book could have been tightened up considerably if the reader’s visits to the enslaved were removed and some back story provided for those who stumbled into this book believing it to be the first of a series.

But the thing which frustrated me the most about the book is that, as well as being Neodymium Apocalypse, Part 1 it is also, Book 4 (of 5) of The Neodymium Chronicles. This may be news to the author, but it does not stand alone. As a final confusion, it appears that Book 3 in the series is currently in space-dock having a major refit.

If you’re into space opera there is much here that is worthy of your time. The thoughtful passages have interesting things to say; the world-building is good and the sapient species are cleverly drawn; the action passages are exciting and clearly executed; the medical and technical material is convincing. All good. There is no real resolution at the end, but it is poised to leap into the final book with grappling hooks extended, so you know what is in store there, so it is satisfying enough.

However, if you want to give this series a go, do yourself a favour and start at the beginning.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on an advance reader copy, so we can’t gauge the final product in this regard.

Rating: *** Three Stars

Reviewed by: Judi Moore

Approximate word count: 115-120,000 words





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