Friday, April 14, 2017

Review: Maggie in the Dark: Transcendence Book 1 by Lynne Cantwell


Genre: Contemporary Fantasy/Drama/Magical Realism/Native American

Description:

“Darkness dawns…

Decades ago, Maggie Brandt fled the East Coast – leaving behind her troubled marriage, her three nearly-grown children, and her controlling mother-in-law – and picked up the threads of her old life in her Midwestern hometown. There, she found a measure of peace, even as she regretted leaving her children behind.

Now, though, her ex-mother-in-law has been diagnosed with uterine cancer, and demands that Maggie dance attendance on her while she recovers – because, she says, there is no one else. Maggie feels she has no choice but to drop everything and comply.

On the way, she stops on a whim at an ancient Native American earthwork, and what she experiences there leaves her reeling. An old woman who may – or may not – be the reincarnation of a Native American spirit charges Maggie with nothing less than Earth’s renewal.

But first, Maggie must bind the family wounds she created in her darkest hours – and with little more than an ancient turtle effigy as her guide.”

Author:

“Lynne Cantwell has been writing fiction since the second grade, when the kid who sat in front of her showed her a book he had written, and she thought, "I could do that." The result was Susie and the Talking Doll, a picture book illustrated by the author about a girl who owned a doll that not only could talk, but could carry on conversations. The book had dialogue but no paragraph breaks.

Today, after a twenty-year career in broadcast journalism and a master's degree in fiction writing from Johns Hopkins University (or perhaps despite the master's degree), Lynne is still writing fantasy. She is also a contributing author at Indies Unlimited. She lives near Washington, DC.”

You can connect with Ms. Cantwell at her website or on Facebook.

Appraisal:

Ms. Cantwell’s Transcendence series takes a different approach to the Earth’s renewal than any of her other series thus far. It’s a chronicle for the personal journey of Maggie Brandt and how her decisions in the past affected so many close to her. Even though those choices were what was best for her at the time, they had negative consequences for others.

Maggie has mixed feelings about returning to help her ex-mother-in-law, Ruth Brandt, through her upcoming surgery. To delay her arrival she decides to visit the Native American earthwork mounds she passes on her way. In the Great Circle of the mound she receives a vision, from the past, of her earning a copper turtle effigy. In her present life, Maggie happened to find this turtle in the woods behind her house when she was a small child and has cherished it ever since.

When leaving the earthwork she is puzzled by the vision. Then an older woman who calls herself Granny gives her a personal prophecy, which includes a quest she must complete to assist in the Earths renewal. Maggie is told:

Three doors will close to you, and you will close three more of your own free will. Then and only then, will the right door open. When that occurs, you must walk through and quickly, because it will not stay open long…For it is only by humanity’s renewal that the Earth itself may be renewed…

Maggie knows at this point she needs to mend fences with Ruth as well as her own children, and their father she divorced years ago. Maggie is completely vexed about her vision and Granny’s words. She is left with figuring things out for herself, and this is her journey.

Ruth was never a woman who was easy to get along with. She turns out to be just as demanding, outspoken, and as bitter as she has always been. She is a master at manipulation, and seems to feed off discord. Maggie is met with several obstacles and diversions along the path she must maneuver around. Old and new family secrets are revealed, which Maggie handles with great skill. The plot has a nice steady pace and the characters are well defined. The dialogue was engaging and realistic as well as fitting each personality perfectly.

Maggie in the Dark has a Women’s Fiction feel to it with a bit of Magical Realism mixed in, thanks to Granny, Zed, and the earth mounds. I only noticed two doors closing that Maggie closed herself. So, the story arc is incomplete at the ending. However, I think Ms. Cantwell found a good place to stop and can’t wait for the continuation.

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FYI:

Maggie in the Dark is the first book in Ms. Cantwell’s new fantasy series, Transcendence.

Format/Typo Issues:

No proofing or formatting issues.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Approximate word count: 45-50,000 words

Thursday, April 13, 2017

Reprise Review: The Little Universe by Jason Matthews


Genre: Science Fiction/Spirituality

Description:

Rose Adams had a dream—to reproduce The Big Bang in miniature—to simulate a tiny universe. Killed in a car accident, her inventor husband, Webster Adams, sees his wife’s dream to fruition. However, Adams realizes he’ll need help and seeks out the assistance of Jon Gruber, a local handyman, to assist him during the experiment.

Author:

Novelist, blogger, and writing coach, Jason Matthews is the founder of a Facebook group of over 2000 writers. Other books besides The Little Universe include Jim’s Life, How to Make, Market, and Sell EBooks All for Free, and Get on Google Front Page. Jason lives with his family in Prismo Beach, California. Drop by and perhaps you can entice him to a game of chess or scrabble.

Learn more at Mr. Matthews website.

Appraisal:

In a writing style integrating science fiction with spirituality, author Jason Matthew’s novel, The Little Universe, is written in the first person point-of-view of Jon Gruber. Jon is a local handyman for hire. Once he begins work for the inventor, Gruber’s eyes are opened to the wonders of the universe—literally.

As Adams’ universe evolves, his AI computer, Jim, seeks out sentient life orbiting the tiny universe’s stars. Through Jim’s cameras, Jon and the team of scientists that join Adams encounter worlds with mystery and scientific advancement.

Webster Adam’s daughter, Whitney, is drawn into one world whose mysterious dwellers may hold the key to everyone’s questions.

The Little Universe will keep readers riveted, especially if they are interested in the meaning of life and beyond.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

Added for Reprise Review: The Little Universe was a nominee in the Science Fiction category for B&P 2015 Readers' Choice Awards. Original review ran April 9, 2014.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: Michael Thal

Approximate word count: 95-100,000 words

Wednesday, April 12, 2017

Review: Leadership: 15 Minutes of Motivation for Workplace Warriors Lesson #1 by Sheila Guion


Genre: Non-Fiction/Inspirational

Description:

“Ladies, Do You Need a Leadership Makeover?

Looking fabulous is only half the battle. Developing the leader within you makes you attractive both on the inside and outside.

In the time it takes to apply your lashes, blush, and lipstick you can add career-enhancing tools to your leadership tool-box.

Who Says Leadership Has to Be Boring?

Retired Marine Veteran, Sheila Guion (formerly Perdue) answers the 911 call to bridge the gap in leadership training for women (who now make up more than 50% of the current U.S. job market).

She reaches out to women too busy for big books, long lectures, and boring content on leadership.

Leadership: 15 Minutes of Motivation for Workplace Warriors is for managers, supervisors, and the go-to-people who want the best leadership experience, but minus the combat boots, pushups, and Meals-Ready-to-Eat (MREs).

These short, but powerful, leadership lessons will boost your confidence, courage, and effectiveness as The Boss.”

Author:

“Sheila Guion (formerly Perdue) is the U.S. Marine Veteran who loves the art of creative story-telling.

Her true leadership stories resonate with women Veterans, and women who have no military background.

She reaches out to women too busy for big books, long lectures, and boring content on leadership.”

Appraisal:

Yeah, I realize that the target audience for this book is a specific gender and I don’t fit. I’m not sure that matters. I think there are beneficial lessons reading this short take on leadership could provide, regardless of gender. And also, some people, regardless of gender, are going to be left wanting more. I’ll explain.

Both the book description and the author’s biography mention that her thing is books that are short and to the point. This one is the length of a short story or an average size magazine article. It uses an example of something that happened to the author, how things didn’t go as planned, and what she did to turn the situation around. It’s inspirational. There is some advice. Things like “develop mental toughness,” which is good advice for a leader. But nothing concrete on how to go about doing that. Given the apparent goal of a short, quick, and inspirational read, I think it succeeds. But if you need direction on how to go about developing mental toughness, I guess you’ll need to find a longer book elsewhere.

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Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 2-3,000 words

Tuesday, April 11, 2017

Review: Skin Walk by Melissa Bowersock


Genre: Mystery/Supernatural/Native American Myths

Description:

“Lacey and Sam are on the job again. This time, the ex-cop and the Navajo medium have been called out to the Navajo reservation to investigate the suspicious death of Sam’s cousin. What they uncover leads them into a realm of the supernatural beyond anything Lacey ever imagined; her years on the LAPD did nothing to prepare her for dealing with witches and shapeshifters. With clues few and far between, can they determine who the murderer is before they themselves become the target of deadly curses and feral shapeshifter beasts?”

Author:
“Melissa Bowersock is an eclectic, award-winning author who writes in a variety of fiction and non-fiction genres: biography, contemporary, western, action, romance, fantasy, paranormal and spiritual. She has been both traditionally and independently published and is a regular contributor to the superblog Indies Unlimited. She lives in a small community in northern Arizona with her husband and an Airedale terrier. She also writes under the pen name Amber Flame.”

Learn more about Ms. Bowersock on her website or follow her on Facebook.

Appraisal:

Lacey seems to be settling in to her new profession as a private investigator. However she misses bouncing ideas and thoughts off Sam. So, when Sam calls and asks if she is interested in going to Arizona with him to investigate his cousin’s suspicious death on the Navajo reservation, she jumps at the chance. Lacey has no idea what she has gotten herself into and tries to rely on her police training. She quickly learns that things that happen on the reservation stay on the reservation. When she is faced with accepting Navajo mysticism she is unnerved and almost frantic trying to come to terms with Navajo reality and the white world reality in which she was raised. She knows she is out of her element and must defer to Sam.

However, she is not willing to let her police training go by the wayside and defies Sam. If she learns her efforts are for naught, then there is no reason for Sam to ever know… The problem is clues are scarce and getting natives to speak about their case is tricky. After saying that, I have to say that I love the mutual respect these two have for each other. I know it sounds like I’m contradicting myself, but their actions and dialogue are realistic, honest, and convincing.

I was surprised at the amount of Navajo lifestyle and beliefs that were revealed in Skin Walk. Sam’s grandfather, Ben, is a treasure. He lives alone in a traditional Hogan away from the family. At Ben’s fire pit, Lacey learns about the name Firecloud. It’s a touching scene full of feels. Since Ben speaks primarily Navajo, it’s thoughtful of Sam to translate for Lacey so she stays in the loop. It was also nice to meet Sam’s brother, Gabe, his wife, Roxanne, their two sons, Carson – twelve, and Griff - ten. Since Sam and Lacey are staying in their house, we get to see what a modern Navajos’ family life is like. This also gave Sam and Lacey the opportunity to bounce ideas and scenarios around about the crime.

There are many twists to the plot, some I found harrowing and fascinating at the same time. Being familiar with Native American traditions and stories I had no problem buying into the premise. That does not mean I am comfortable with the paranormal factor. Even Sam, with his abilities, would admit this experience tested his limits. I also found this an emotional tale about family, cultural diversity, loyalty, and human values. I sure hope Ms. Bowersock has more story ideas for Sam Firecloud and Lacey Fitzpatrick. I’m loving this series.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

Skin Walk is the second book in A Lacey Fitzpatrick and Sam Firecloud Mystery series. The first book is titled Ghost Walk.

Format/Typo Issues:

My review is based on a beta, pre-release version. I am unable to judge the final version in this area.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Approximate word count: 50-55,000 words

Monday, April 10, 2017

Review: Karmic Tribunal by May Sinclair PhD


Genre: Satire/Science Fiction

Description:

“Most people hate politicians—unless they are one.
Wouldn’t it be great to know that what goes around does come round? That politicians who make bold promises to secure their election would have to live with the consequences of their actions—or inactions—just like us ordinary people?

To balance the karma, the politician in this story, Henrietta Radcliff Carstairs, has to review her life choices in a tribunal conducted between her last and next lifetime.”

Author:

“May Sinclair's doctorate is in the Philosophy of Metaphysics. She is an award-winning, internationally acclaimed author, and she teaches dream interpretation and analysis on the precepts of Carl G. Jung. Dr. Sinclair has at times written under her nom de plume, Mason Clare. Much of her writing relates to symbolism. She is known throughout the United States and the British Isles. All of her work is based on extensive research and study of both ancient and modern philosophical teachings, where she has learned and continues to foster a merging of our physical, mental, emotional, and spiritual selves.”

Appraisal:

I find myself torn in trying to come to an overall conclusion about Karmic Tribunal. There are things I liked. Liked a lot. And there are other parts of the story that were problematic, at least they were for me.

I like the premise of the story that we go from one life to the next and before being reincarnated into our next life an evaluation is done of our previous life. Our next step is determined by what is going to best balance out karma. For a very simple example, this concept might have a slave owner reincarnated as a child of slaves who will probably become a slave himself.

In Karmic Tribunal we have a politician going through this evaluation. The choice of a politician as the subject of the evaluation is a good choice because it is easy to see how, depending on how the particular politician did their job, a balancing of karma could go a lot of different directions.

The issue I had was that the politician in the story was based on a real-life person and as soon as I realized who that was the premise was ruined for me. Instead of pondering the evidence submitted to the tribunal and trying to guess what they might see as appropriate karmic balancing, I reacted differently. I found myself arguing with evidence presented that didn't fit my opinion of the real person. The ability to read the story as a form of escapism or participate in the mental exercise of saying “what if” was gone. I'm not sure that it would matter what a reader's feelings about the real person are. I could see anyone having this same issue. (Most readers are going to have an opinion on the person in question.) I guess this is the risk in basing fictional characters on real people.

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Format/Typo Issues:

Borderline. I saw a few more typos or proofreading misses than I like to see in a book of this length, but they are mostly very minor errors.

Rating: *** Three Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 20-25,000 words

Friday, April 7, 2017

Review: Making Angel by Amanda Washington


Genre: Romance

Description:

"Heir to a powerful Las Vegas crime family, D’Angelo Mariani’s survival depends on his ability to prove his value to his father. Forced out of the technology lab and into the underworld, Angel is on the brink of pulling off the impossible when he runs into a captivating humanitarian who changes everything.

Markie Davis is all about compassion, service, and the ultimate adrenaline rush. After a year-long stint volunteering in an African orphanage, she’s in Vegas to check up on her wayward little sister. Markie never anticipated meeting someone like Angel.

Everyone knows Angel's family is dangerous, but the secrets Markie's been keeping might just be fatal… "

Author:

"Amanda Washington first put her dreams to paper in 1999. Making Angel is the first book in her new adult mafia fiction series, but she's also written dystopian and young adult novels. When she's not writing, she's busy living out her real adventure in southwest Washington with her husband and their five boys." For more information visit Amazon's Amanda Washington Page.  

Appraisal:

This is a hybrid of a novel. From the description, and the beginning of the book, a reader would expect a story about a mafia family with a love story thrown in but in fact it is a love story with a mafia family thrown in. The lovers are Angel Mariani and Markie (known simply as Markie). Angel is the son of a powerful mafia leader, expected to follow his father into the family business but Angel is only interested in technology. His life is complicated by the fact that he would do almost anything to please his father.

Angel dislikes and disagrees with violence but even so, he does what he has to do to carry out his father's wishes. His constant companion is called "Bones", his best friend since childhood but also his bodyguard. They meet Markie in the airport where she is waiting for her sister to pick her up. She is just back from working in an orphanage in Zambia. Bones suspects Markie of having a secret and is worried about his friend's attraction to her.

I like the way the book is written in sections; some from Angel's point of view and some from Markie's.

Markie is a soft, gentle, naive, innocent girl. Angel thinks:

There was something different about Markie, though. Her dimples. Her perfect lips. The innocence in her bright blue eyes . . . Her long blonde curls cascaded down her back and, as she slipped a rogue lock behind her ear . . .

However, this description would appear to make her ordinary, not different at all; it's a description of a doll. The same goes for Angel himself. Markie thinks:

Barely older than me, he worked the sexy Italian look like a movie star. His tailored suit might as well have had moneybags taped to it . . .

This makes both of them stereotypes of the romantic novel.

Bones, Angel's bodyguard is an interesting character - loyal, devoted and loving yet not in an inferior way; he is a complete, clever, competent person and fun to read about.

The narrative doesn't quite flow but is more like a series of set pieces or scenes, like the game with the children, the journey to San Diego, or being on the High Roller. However the writing is good and the dialogue natural and believable. The pace and shape of the book are very good as well, and it has been well edited and proofed.

The prologue isn't necessary and is too short in any case.

The last quarter of the book is both melodramatic and improbable and, in fact, might be morally questionable.

The story as a whole is slow and gentle and should be enjoyed by readers who like a little mystery with their romance.

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FYI:

Some graphic violence

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: Joan Slowey

Approximate word count: 85-90,000 words

Thursday, April 6, 2017

Reprise Review: One Right Thing by Matthew Iden


Genre: Police Procedural/Mystery

Description:

“Retired DC Homicide detective Marty Singer is driving through rural Virginia when he sees a billboard by the side of the road with the picture of a man and a simple, stunning question:

J.D. HOPE WAS MURDERED ON MAY 6TH. DO YOU KNOW WHY?

To most, the message means nothing. But Marty stops the car, turns around, and rushes headlong into a deadly mix of drugs, lies, and double-crosses.

Because Marty's got his own history with the man on the sign...and he needs to find out who murdered J.D. Hope and why if he wants to do One Right Thing.”

Author:

Currently a resident of Northern Virginia, Matthew Iden has lived, worked, and studied around the world. You’ll find lots of short stories and books on his author central page at Amazon including the (so far) five book Marty Singer Mystery series. The first of these, A Reason to Live, was a nominee in the mystery category of the 2014 Books and Pals Readers’ Choice awards.

For more, visit the author’s website.

Appraisal:

I loved the first two Marty Singer mysteries and this one, the third in the series, continues the streak. Part of the appeal is the twist on the genre, since technically Marty is no longer a policeman. He doesn’t have to operate under the same constraints. He doesn’t have the same readily available resources. Yet, in his heart, he’s still a cop and the series still feels like a police procedural.

I also like Marty for the kind of person he is, approaching his vocation turned avocation to protect and serve, wanting to see justice done. In this particular case the main thing motivating Marty is, as the title implies, a desire to do the right thing. Marty has a history with the murder victim and is driven to find his murderer to make up for a feeling that he fell short in his duties to him in the past.

I also like author Iden’s ability to string words together in a way that doesn’t feel like he’s trying too hard, yet sometimes stops me short with their subtle, yet evocative way of describing something. One example is this description of a house.

I stopped in front of a white-sided Queen Anne–style home on the corner of Beal and Market. It was a sprawling pile, with wraparound porch, octagonal tower, and meticulously carved gingerbread under the eaves. The knobs, pilasters, dentils, and other features that I’m sure an architect would have a word for were painted a slate blue with salmon trim, giving the whole thing a slightly silly, fairy-tale cast.

If you’re a fan of police procedurals or mysteries, One Right Thing (really the entire Marty Singer Mystery series) is well worth your time.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

Some adult language.

Although part of a series, this book can be read as a standalone. Or, if you’d prefer to read in order, the first book of the series, A Reason to Live, is free indefinitely for your eReader from most major retailers.

Added for Reprise Review: One Right Thing was a nominee in the Mystery category for B&P 2015 Readers' Choice Awards. Original review ran September 12, 2014. Was signed to Amazon's Thomas & Mercer publishing imprint and republished in December, 2014.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 70-75,000 words

Wednesday, April 5, 2017

Review: Wall Street Kitchen by Victor Chiu


Genre: Non-Fiction

Description:

The author, Victor Chiu, tells us the lessons he was taught in his mother's kitchen about how to make money investing in the stock market.

Author:

Canadian Victor Chiu is an active investor in stocks and real estate. His writings have previously appeared in Harvard Business Review and U.S. News & World Report. This appears to be his first book.

Appraisal:

Self-published non-Fiction books from relative unknowns have a potential credibility gap. Does this person really know what they're talking about? Of course just because a publisher decided to put a book out doesn't mean it's credible. So ultimately we're left vetting the information based on prior knowledge, common sense, comparisons to what others say on the subject, and what our “gut” tells us to think.

Based on the criteria above, I found the advice given in Wall Street Kitchen to be solid. The basics agree with other investment advice I've seen from credible sources (one example being what the National Association of Investment Clubs suggests to their member clubs). It passes the common sense test for me as well. Some people will like the folksy style and it will help those readers retain the concepts better. Others won't. But the advice seems solid to me.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 55-60,000 words

Tuesday, April 4, 2017

Review: Wild Hearts of Summer by Donna Fasano


Genre: Romance/Contemporary Fiction

Description:

“Cathy Whitley’s two best friends, Sara and Heather, may have found the men of their dreams… and that’s all well and good for them. But that’s not going to happen to Cathy. She allowed love to catch her off-guard once and it drained her, body and soul. She’ll never let it happen again.

Brad Henderson has been chasing Cathy for years. He’s settled for their on-again-off-again, ‘friends with bennies’ relationship for far longer than he expected. Attempting to navigate the rip currents surrounding her heart has left him swimming in circles.

Then Brad inherits a business from billionaire Harold Hopewell. Hopewell had traveled the world and was touched by the stories of the people he met. In death, Hopewell is giving back, leaving an unusual will filled with life-altering bequests. Brad is stunned and wonders if his new life will draw Cathy closer—or push her further out of reach.

One way or the other, it’s time to draw a line in the sand…”

Author:

“Donna Fasano is a three-time winner of the HOLT Medallion, a CataRomance Reviewers Choice Award winner for Best Single Title, a Desert Rose Golden Quill Award finalist, a Golden Heart finalist, and a two-time winner of Best Romance of the Year given by BigAl's Books & Pals Review Blog. Her books have sold 4 million copies worldwide and have been published in two dozen languages. Her novels have made the Kindle Top 100 Paid List numerous times, climbing as high as #1.”

You can learn more about Ms. Fasano on her website or stalk her onFacebook.

Appraisal:

I have enjoyed this Ocean City Boardwalk Series from the beginning. Wild Hearts of Summer is Cathy’s story and it was well worth waiting for. Cathy is a feisty, strong-willed thirty-five year-old who was raised by a dysfunctional family. Her hard life continued with a bad marriage after she graduated. When she finally escaped, she moved back to Ocean City to reunite with her friends, Sara and Heather. Cathy is still working on her recovery, trying to define who she is. She is the wildest and most free-spirited of the group and refuses to be tamed. She also has an on-again-off-again relationship with Brad Henderson, who is the head lifeguard at the beach.

Brad has been patient with Cathy for the last five years since her divorce, letting her take her time to move on. However, as certain events come to pass he decides he wants more of a commitment in their relationship. Their journey is heart-warming and tense as Cathy has to come to terms with her past and heart. It’s especially hard on her because she’s on the outs with Heather, and Sara has enough stress of her own to deal with at this time. So, she’s more or less on her own to work through the feelings warring in her soul.

Ms. Fasano has a way of weaving wonderful heart-warming stories that never disappoint. Her characters are always well-developed, their dialogue is engaging, and realistic. The setting at Ocean Beach is so breathtakingly described you can feel the ocean breeze, smell the salty air, and almost hear the waves hitting the beach.

I do hope there will be more stories with these characters. They’ve become like friends of my own, and I want to keep track of them. I would love to eat breakfast at the Sunshine Café, spend the night at the Lonely Loon, and enjoy the confections from Sara’s Sweet Shop.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

Wild Hearts of Summer is Book three in the Ocean City Boardwalk Series. While this third book could be read as a stand-alone, the reader will have a deeper understanding of all the characters having read this series in order. Ms. Fasano also includes recipes at the end of this story, as she has in the other books of this series.

Format/Typo Issues:

I found no proofing issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Approximate word count: 35-40,000 words

Monday, April 3, 2017

Review: Squeeze by Chris Rhatigan


Genre: Noir

Description:

Lionel Kaspar, a hard-drinking gambler, parlays a bit of luck to move from a dead end clerical job into a slightly higher paying position as a reporter on a local newspaper. He quickly finds ways to scam his editor into a pay raise and blackmail his old boss. The minor monetary success is built on ground more treacherous than Kaspar imagined.

Author:

“Chris Rhatigan is the co-publisher of crime fiction syndicate All Due Respect Books. He is the author of The Kind of Friends Who Murder Each Other, Squeeze, and Race to the Bottom. He lives in Mussoorie, India.”

Appraisal:

Squeeze captured this reader like the last hardwood roller coaster on the eastern seaboard. A glance at nostalgia, a coin for a ticket and before you can “thank you sir” you’re hurtling out over gray-green breakers that look a lot more ominous than they did from shore. But no exit or respite until you reach the end.

Rhatigan writes with dark humor and a feel for characters devoid of redeeming virtues, great fun for us with twisted psyches or for us seeking escape from stupefyingly normal psyches.

The hero Kaspar is a delightful sociopath so involved in working out the next cheap scam or twenty dollar sports bet that he can’t see where his focus on beer money is leading him. The people he bruises along the way are similarly low on the evolutionary scale of human morals. Little harm, little foul until a reporter from a rival newspaper applies his life-wrecking expertise to Kaspar.

The rival squeezes too hard and Kaspar lacks the wit to act in any way other than a cornered rat--he bites.

My only disappointment was a rather thin plot and an ending more suited to a short story than a novella. Hints of intrigue or subplots were left unexplored as Kaspar stumbled his way toward an inexorable and easily anticipated conclusion.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: Sam Waite

Approximate word count: 25-30,000 words