Thursday, March 17, 2011

Falling Star / Philip Chen

Genre: Thriller / Suspense

Approximate word count: 95-100,00 words

Availability Kindle: YES    Nook: YES    DTB: YES


Born in China, Philip Chen came to the US as a young child. After receiving a Master of Science degree from Stanford University, he worked as an ocean research engineer, helping develop methods of exploring the sea as far as 20,000 feet deep. He later earned his law degree from the University of Minnesota and has worked in a variety of fields including trial attorney and investment banker.


Four mysterious, yet obviously manmade, objects are discovered in the deep sea bracketing the coast of the US. What are they? How did they get there? Did they come from outer space or were they put there by an enemy of the US? Are they dangerous? For almost thirty years a secret military operation secretly studies and monitors the objects. Then they begin to come to life.


In Falling Star, Philip Chen spins a great yarn in this thriller combining science and cold war political intrigue. The plot is complex spanning many years and a wide range of settings. While the cast of characters is large, the major characters are all well drawn and likeable, with unique personalities and characteristics that makes keeping them straight easy. Aloysius “Mike” Liu, one of the few characters featured throughout most of the book has a life story surprising like Chen’s.

With a complex plot that touches on many technical areas, Chen appears to have done his research. The science, politics, geography and other technical subjects appear realistic. Although fiction, nothing about his story is something you’ll say, “That couldn’t have possibly happened.”

This attention to detail is both a strength and the source of my only two complaints. The first is a propensity to repeat a detail that matters, but isn’t critical. An example is, Mike and Ellen went into the surprisingly small Situation Room of CSAC. Television monitors lined one wall of the remarkably small room. That the room is small is a detail that matters. It adds color, helping the reader imagine what the author pictures. It isn’t a detail that requires repeating.

The other idiosyncrasy that sometimes got in the way of the story is painting a picture with too much specific detail. Take this description of an investment banker’s office. Beside the large mahogany desk and leather chair, the office had a comfortable leather sofa and armchair, mahogany coffee table, dark Chippendale side chairs, and expensive oriental lamps. Rather than inventory the office furnishings this could have been accomplished with something like, “The office was expensively furnished in dark wood and leather by Chippendale.”

Despite the occasional bump from these writing tics, I found Falling Star an enjoyable read. The story line is both original and at credible enough to make you think it might have really happened.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: **** Four stars


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Brian Morris said...

When I read a certain other set of comments about a new book Big Al reviewed (which attracted hundreds of follow-on comments) it reminded me of the need for authers to use the services of a proofreader and an editor.

These services are not expensive. But they remove 99.9% of the potential for being hugely embarrassed by silly errors, which should have been found and corrected.

I teach proofreading and editing skills (Google NZIBS) and writing. This is something I impress upon new authors. Get someone OTHER THAN YOURSELF to check your work.

Thank you book reviewers. You do sterling work.
Brian Morris

Anonymous said...

This thread is so entertaining.
I hope she writes a sequel soon.

Anonymous said...

How to self-destruct in style.
I guess its back to the painting.