Genre: Humor/Erotica/Short
Story
Description:
“When Heather finds out her boyfriend is cheating again, she does the
only sensible thing she can think of. She orders fried chicken!”
Author:
From Terry Demcloshoff’s Amazon Author page, “A fighter pilot by day,
food porn author by night, Terry Demcloshoff is a man of action, mystery and
fine dining in, or around fine places. Born on a cruise ship between Florida
and the Caribbean, he grew up on the sea never seeing land until his tenth
birthday. He's been many places and seen many things, now he wishes to share
these experiences with the world through the art of storytelling.”
Appraisal:
Heather is tired of her cheating boyfriend, Peter. It’s humiliating,
especially when all of her co-workers start giving her advice about how they
would deal with him. She insists she loves him and doesn’t want to lose him.
She’s just tired of his infidelity. At the end of the work day Lucy, a new co-worker,
comes to her cubicle and offers her a solution. Lucy’s idea beats the heck out
of going to a bar and picking up a one-night stand, and none of her other
co-workers would be the wiser.
This story is short on words but not on anticipation, emotion, and
angst. The ending is embarrassing and hysterical.
FYI:
Bedroom scenes could be offensive to some. Don’t forget to ask Roger
to deliver your chicken.
Format/Typo
Issues:
Nothing significant.
Rating:
**** Four Stars
Reviewed
by: ?wazithinkin
Approximate
word count: 4-5,000 words
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