Review: The Ethical Assassin by William Ferraiolo

 

Genre: Crime Fiction/Psychological Thriller

Description:

“A found journal whose author wishes to remain anonymous... After losing his family in a tragic automobile accident, one man’s reason to go on living is stripped away. That is until one day, by chance - some might call it serendipity - he overhears a conversation that moves him to consider a new life. A man needs to be killed, and our protagonist decides to kill him. But he doesn’t stop there. Keeping a journal at every step of his way, our anonymous protagonist archives the subsequent events, taking the reader through his accounts of the men he kills and the causal antecedents that facilitate these assassinations. Attempting to come to grips with the life-shattering car crash while trying to make sense of the moral ramifications of his deadly acts of vigilantism - the ethical assassin kills only men who need killing - he tells us his story while attempting to navigate the dangers of doing so.”

Author:

“William Ferraiolo received a Ph.D. in philosophy from the University of Oklahoma in 1997. Since that time, he has been teaching philosophy at San Joaquin Delta College in Stockton, California.”

Ferrailo has written several books which all seem to be non-fiction prior to this one.

Appraisal:

This made for an interesting read. The premise (we can pretend it is true if you want) is that this is a “memoir” that was found by a waitress in a diner and based on the wishes of the author (he even makes that clear in the story) was published as a book. The author, after a life-changing disaster in his own life becomes an assassin, not killing people for hire or killing famous people, but instead killing people who, based on their actions, “have it coming.”

This was an interesting premise. The author didn’t want to go to prison, which he makes very clear, so he’s careful in choosing his victims, not taking chances on some who he thinks deserve to die, but involving situations where he’d be more likely to get caught. He keeps on the move and does all that he can to prevent getting caught. A lot of the story is, instead of what I’ll call the “action” of planning and executing one of his victims is instead pondering what he’s doing, his reasons for doing it, and the philosophy of that. If these people really deserve to die, is him making it happen really a bad thing? These and numerous other questions are going through his mind over and over so at points it feels a bit repetitive, but it also feels real, like anyone struggling with an idea tends to review the same things over and over in their mind. Ultimately it made for a thought provoking read, even if I’m not going to follow in his footsteps.

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Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on an ARC (advance reviewer copy) so I can’t gauge the final product in this area.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 40-45,000 words

Review: Eve Versus the Apocalypse by Erica Lucke Dean

 

Genre: Urban Fantasy/Romance/Dystopian

Description:

“When everyone Eve cares about is killed in an alien invasion, she uses her skills with a blade to battle her way through the changing landscape. But with humanity on the brink of extinction, the aliens aren't the only monsters the college color guard faces.

After fleeing the war zone that was once Atlanta, Eve heads north to her family’s cabin in the woods. In the desolate mountain town, she encounters a group of survivors on the way to the fabled Safe Zone. Impressed with her fighting skills, the group's leader invites her to join their ranks.

But trust is a rare commodity in Eve’s new reality, and she must decide whether an alliance with the dangerously sexy Archer is worth the risk. His offer of protection is tempting, but if she agrees to join him, she’ll be putting more than her life on the line. She can either save what's left of humanity or lose her heart—and the whole damn world along with it.”

Author:

“Best known for her engaging and relatable characters, Erica Lucke Dean specializes in crafting stories that explore the complexities of relationships and feature quirky young women navigating the ups and downs of life and love. For over a decade, her novels have captivated readers of romantic comedies and paranormal romances alike, thanks to her ability to blend humor and authentic emotions.

Erica was born in the Twin Tiers of Upstate New York and lived on both coasts before ultimately settling in the scenic North Georgia Mountains, where she and her family live with two ginormous English Mastiffs and a diabolical Frenchie hell-bent on world domination.”

Appraisal:

The world has gone crazy, invaded by some strange aliens who are killing off the human population. Eve is tough and with the saber she used to use for show as a member of the college color guard she figures out how to deal with them well enough to survive, at least so far. While this is happening in the real world, Georgia specifically, the story world is much different with these aliens and the issues they caused. Avoiding the aliens and finding what is needed to survive for the humans who are left is a challenge. In some ways dealing with the humans is tougher. Eve knows she can’t trust the aliens, but with the humans sometimes she can and sometimes maybe not. Figuring that out is problematic at times. Luckily, she finds out that there is an area that is safe from the aliens, if only she can get there. This would be an adventure even without the twist of Archer, a man she’s very attracted to who seems to like her too, but can she trust him? Eve’s adventure as she worked through the issues that popped up kept me engrossed in this story to the last word.

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FYI:

Some adult language and a few mild adult situations.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 75-80,000 words

Reprise Review: The Call by Laurie Boris

 Genre: Women’s Fiction/Sports Fiction

Description:

“As one of the first female umpires in the minors, Margie puts up with insults and worse from people who think women don’t belong in baseball. Forget making history—Margie just wants to do her job and be part of the game she loves.

She’s ready for the rude comments. The lousy pay. The endless traveling. But when she suspects a big-name slugger of cheating, she has to choose: let the dirty player get away with it, or blow the whistle and risk her career…and maybe her twin brother’s major-league prospects, too.

Now it’s up to Margie to make the call.”

Author:

“Laurie Boris has been writing fiction for over twenty-five years and is the award-winning author of seven novels. When not playing with the universe of imaginary people in her head, she’s a freelance copyeditor and enjoys baseball, reading, and avoiding housework. She lives in New York’s lovely Hudson Valley.”

Appraisal:

For me this was a great read for many different reasons. Some of those reasons might be things that would apply to you too.

The main appeal is that this is a good story. The struggle to be as good as you can be at your chosen profession, the difficulties that sometimes complicate that, and figuring out how to deal with it, is something many of us can empathize with. I’ve also read a couple things lately that talked about how fiction can help us better understand the lives of people not like us, and this was good for me to imagine the challenges of being a woman in a male-dominated profession. I suspect men and women are going to benefit from reading this kind of tale in different ways, but benefit regardless.

I’m not a big sports fan, but I’m sure those who are will enjoy the baseball part of the story. As someone who came of age about the same time as the characters in this story (late 70s) I found myself experiencing a bit of nostalgia that the typical reader wouldn’t. (But I refuse to call this historical fiction for you young’uns.) All in all, a good read, even for those who would typically stay away from women’s fiction or sports fiction.

I was also curious as to the status of female umpires in the major and minor leagues. How credible was this? What I found is that the first woman to work as an umpire in the minor leagues of professional baseball did so in 1972, so the story could have happened as indicated. But 45 years later it looks like women umpires are still a rarity with the first woman to work in the major leagues not doing so until 2007 and very few that work in professional baseball at any level. Maybe the difficulties Margie experiences are more contemporary than I thought.

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FYI:

Uses some adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 95-100,000 words

Review: Romeo and Juliet Keep Their Eyes on the Prize by Richard Engling

 

Genre: Humorous

Description:

This is an amusing mashup of self-help literature and a production of Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet through the eyes of the seriously impoverished artistic director of an ensemble theatre company in Chicago. Some of the disasters which befall the production have the ring of truth. Some of the material is laugh-out-loud funny. Often these are the same bits.

Dwayne Finnegan is in love with his work but is very aware that doing what he loves is not making him a living. And then his beloved wife tells him she really wants a baby. Is he going to have to join the corporate rat race and put a permanent lid on his creativity? Then he picks up this self-help book and somehow … it helps!

Author:

Richard Engling is or has been an actor, director, playwright, novelist and musician. He has “spent a lifetime writing and performing, paying his bills as a teacher, truck driver, and copywriter, while performing as an actor, drummer in a jazz quartet”, and was the founding artistic director of Polarity ensemble theatre company in Chicago. He has written a number of plays (some of which have been collected in print) and three other novels. He has degrees in Creative Writing and Theatre.

Appraisal:

I picked this for review because I’ve done a lot of Am Dram in my time (in the UK) and remember very well indeed the love-hate relationship with it (and the people one’s working with), the exhilaration, the pitfalls, the shoestring budgeting, the hang-it-all moment when the expensive thing that breaks the budget becomes a must-have, the endless irritation of people not doing what they’re told, and the extraordinary way all that disparity becomes (for the life of the run) a living Thing that belongs to all those involved, that (often) is almost nothing like what you set out to create. It is fascinating. And addictive.

Engling has put this, and more, on the page very amusingly. It all feels very real.

There are a couple of points made in this book which I’ll just tease out: the arts in general are very vulnerable. Fringe theatre particularly so because it is ephemeral. When the run of the play is over it’s forgotten, except by those few who saw it or were in it or helped produce it. Funding is wafer thin. So people can only really afford to do it if their family has money or they live a cold and lonely life in a garret existing on fresh air and steam. The second point is that, no matter how Woke you are, there should be a limit to how much you monkey about with scripts in the name of inclusivity. Even Shakespeare. Or perhaps especially Shakespeare.

The book deals with all of this, yet manages to make the endless problems not only funny but also resolvable. I was never quite sure what “winning boats rise together” actually means, but I could see that as the novel developed the self-help mantras were definitely giving Dwayne tools which were helping him to succeed. I used to find, myself, that a very large vodka did the trick …

If you have any interest in theatre – especially fringe theatre – you will enjoy this.

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FYI:

Format/Typo Issues:

A few missing words, mainly the easy-to-miss little ones that scuttle off and hide when you’re not looking, but which when present do illuminate a sentence for the reader …

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: Judi Moore

Approximate word count: 70-75,000 words

Review: Last Night at the Nowhere Cliff: A Short Story Collection by M.H. Altis

 

Genre: Short Story Collection

Description:

“Hello there and welcome to Last Night at the Nowhere Cliff: A Short Story Collection, containing laugh-out-loud funnies, tear-jerking ruminations, and many other adventures!

Be warned: some of these stories may be truly beautiful, some may be funny, and some may be outright odd. Such is life, am I right?”

Author:

“Nicknamed ‘The Human Resource’ by their friends due to their penchant for pulling random facts out of thin air, they wrote their first short story when they were young, scribbling away with a stubby pencil and a dollar store spiral-bound notebook. Ever since then, they’ve been hooked, writing all sorts of wacky, funny, scary, and heart-breaking stories.

M.H. writes to express themself, their thoughts, ideas, and emotions. They also have a deep interest in how fiction connects to reality and how character arcs mirror our own lives.

M.H. Altis has written several books, from 250,000-word epics to 50,000-word dashes, and even more short stories. With a growing unreleased catalogue, they decided it was finally time to share their creations with the world.”

Appraisal:

This was a fun read. The book starts out with a quick run down of the stories to come with a bit about what is in the story and possibly an indication of what inspired it. The stories vary in genre and length. While the odds are pretty good that you’ll find a few of these that don’t really pull you in, odds are even better that you’ll find some that really speak to you. Unless your taste as a reader is incredibly broad and you think all genres of fiction are equal in which case you’ll probably like them all. I liked that it mixed things up which kept me guessing what I might get in the next story. Overall a fun read.

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FYI:

Some adult language and some minorly adult situations make an appearance.

Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on an advance reader copy so I can’t judge the final product in this area.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 60-65,000 words

Review: Grave Expectations by Rob Johnson

 Genre: Crime/Comedy

Description:

“I need a coffin,’ she said.

Not an unusual request to put to an undertaker and not an unwelcome one either, since Max, Alan and Scratch are once again struggling to keep their funeral business from going under.

The sale of a single coffin wasn’t going to save them, of course, but the woman who wants it happens to be a dominatrix with a supposedly foolproof plan to rob a bank.

Max and his partners don’t exactly jump at the chance as their previous attempts at bank robbery had almost always ended in disaster. But maybe this was an opportunity too good to miss.

What they hadn’t bargained for, though, was that the bank job was just the beginning of a catastrophic series of events including blackmail, betrayal, murder and an unwelcome brush with organised crime.”

Author:

Rob Johnson is a playwright with four plays that have been professionally produced and toured throughout the UK. He has also written several books.

For more, visit Johnson’s website.

Appraisal:

As with the other books in this series, the main protagonists are Max Dempsey (okay, that’s not really his name, but it is the name he uses now, read the book to understand why) and his two partners. In theory they’re in the undertaking business, selling coffins, preparing people for burial or cremating their bodies … you know, not what most of us would consider fun, but definitely a legitimate business. But when the only other undertaker in the area seems to be getting all the business and the money coming in isn’t coming nearly fast enough to cover the money going out, a guy’s gotta find some way to make a few bucks to get through the dry patch, right? They’ve robbed banks before and when presented with a proposal that appears to be a sure thing, they jump at the chance. Down the rabbit hole they go as complications happen and their reaction to those only causes more complications. Whether or not it all works out for them and how they finally get to whatever the end result turns out to be is an adventure that keeps them and you, the reader, on your toes as the unexpected keeps happening and the whole time you’re going to be laughing (after all, it is a comedic crime story) as well as happy you aren’t one of Max’s partners.

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FYI:

You’ll have no doubt that the author as well as all the characters are Brits, not only from the UK spelling conventions, but from the British slang that is constantly coming from the mouths of all the characters.

Also some adult language and some adult topics come up.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 70-75,000 words

Review: Suicide Bridge by Daniel Kowalski

 

Genre: Psychological Thriller/Mystery

Description:

“After hearing that a coworker has committed suicide by jumping off a bridge, a recovering drug addict begins investigating the case on her own and she starts to suspect that her boyfriend might be a murderer.

In this exciting psychological thriller, after hearing about a coworker's apparent suicide on a notorious bridge, Michelle Rhodes, a recovering drug addict, finds herself plunged into a gripping mystery. Determined to uncover the truth behind her friend Sarah's disappearance, Michelle embarks on a relentless investigation, despite facing obstacles at every turn. As she delves deeper into the case, Michelle begins to suspect that her boyfriend, Cory, may be harboring dark secrets that connect him to the tragedy. But the truth she discovers will be stranger than she could possibly imagine in this page turner full of twists that will keep you on the edge of your seat.

Set against the backdrop of a small town plagued by whispers of past tragedies, Suicide Bridge is a psychological thriller that will keep readers on the edge of their seats. With its fast-paced narrative and intricate plot twists, this suspenseful tale explores themes of deception, betrayal, and the fragile nature of trust. As Michelle races against time to unravel the mystery, she discovers that the truth is far more sinister than she could have ever imagined.”

Author:

Daniel Kowalski has had several screenplays been optioned by Hollywood production companies. This is his first novel with another one now available.

Appraisal:

This book kept me guessing, trying to figure out what was going on and just as I thought I had a handle on it, something different would happen making me realize I was wrong. It’s a fast-paced, engrossing and intriguing read with an interesting setting and characters that drew me in with a story line that keeps you guessing the entire time.

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FYI:

A small amount of adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 50-55,00 words

Reprise Review: Double Dealing in Dubuque by Dean Klinkenberg

 

Genre: Mystery

Description:

“Writer Frank Dodge is feeling optimistic for a change. He just landed a plum assignment from a national magazine to write about the growth of boutique food in the Midwest. Dodge's mood quickly turns sour, though, when his scheming rival Helen shows up--is she trying to steal another story from him? When a fire erupts at the food convention Dodge is scouting out, two people die and Dodge can't shake the feeling that the fire was no accident.

Dodge's search for the truth will take him from the specialty shops of Galena, Illinois, through the neighborhoods of Dubuque, Iowa, and to the murky backwaters of the Mississippi River, landing him in the middle of a volatile feud between ice cream queen Stella and chocolatier Ashley.

Can he keep Helen at bay as he investigates the fire? And how far will Stella and Ashley ultimately go to skewer each other? Double-Dealing in Dubuque is a compelling novel that delves into what can go wrong when feuds get out of hand.”

Author:

“Dean Klinkenberg, the Mississippi Valley Traveler, explores the back roads and backwaters of the Mississippi River Valley, a place with an abundance of stories to tell, big characters, epic struggles, do-gooders and evil-doers. Some of those stories are in the Frank Dodge mystery series; others you’ll find in the Mississippi Valley Traveler guidebooks. He lives in St. Louis with his husband, John, and a parrot, Ra.”

Appraisal:

This is Dean Klinkenberg’s second Frank Dodge mystery and, like Klinkenberg himself, Dodge operates in what he describes as “Middle America, where—in the mind of my editor—cultural trends arrive via Pony Express. But, hey, it’s my home, where I keep my stuff—parachute pants, pet rock, and all.” There might be a hint there of who the ideal reader for this book would be. The setting for the series in smaller towns and cities along the Mississippi is going to work best for those from Middle America who can laugh at our foibles, but also recognize that those on the coasts aren’t as special as they might think. As Dodge put it, “When folks on the coasts adopt things that we’ve been doing all along, we’re content to let them think they invented it. It’s important to them to feel that way, and we’re sensitive to other people’s feelings.”

As the paragraph above shows, Klinkenberg delivers a few straight lines that should elicit a laugh or at least a chuckle from readers who are paying attention. But there is also a good mystery here. Some interesting characters and a fun time for the reader to follow along with Frank while we try to figure out who set the fire that killed two people at the convention center.

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FYI:

Some adult language.

This is the second mystery in this series featuring Frank Dodge. However, this book can be read as a standalone.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 80-85,000 words

Review: Black On Madison Avenue by Mark S. Robinson

 

Genre: Memoir

Description:

“Advertising decides what America wants. And yet, for an industry that professes to be the vanguard of creativity, popular culture and forward thinking, advertising is one of the most un-diverse white-collar professions in America. Surprisingly, despite all of its public gestures of ‘wokeness’, Madison Avenue would like to keep it that way.

Black on Madison Avenue explains how – and why – the author landed on Madison Avenue, and shares some of his incredible adventures over the past 40+ years. Yes, adventures. Have you ever gotten into a shouting match with a Venezuelan Army general in the middle of a military coup? He has. He kidnapped advertising legend Jim Jordan, insulted high-ranking Chinese government officials at a formal dinner and launched the first multicultural marketing holding company.

Mark Robinson was the co-founder of Spike/DDB, along with filmmaker Spike Lee and has stories no one else could tell. Robinson’s stories include Bill Cosby, Mike Tyson, Vanessa Williams, Usher, Oprah, Zsa Zsa Gabor, James Brown and Notorious B.I.G.”

Author:

Mark S. Robinson is a longtime employee, manager, and founder of various New York based advertising agencies. He lives with his wife in Connecticut.

Appraisal:

I often say that many books, but especially memoirs, often have one of two effects when you read them, depending on your situation and that of the protagonist or subject of the memoir. If they’re like you, it gives a chance to compare experiences and can sometimes give you a different perspective on your own life. But if the author’s life is much different than yours, it can help you better understand others which is a positive for all concerned.

This book definitely fits that second option for me as my career couldn’t have been much different from Mark Robinson’s work in advertising, not to mention my pale skin that would help me blend in on Madison Avenue. Surprisingly I also spotted some things where our experiences were the same. For example how if you do good work the connections at one job will often help lead to other opportunities at different companies.

This book is structured as a series of stories, with each chapter containing a story that could stand alone, but what happens in one will often relate to things that happened in another in such a way that you’ll see the patterns and how things evolved over time in some ways and not in others for Robinson and other blacks in the advertising business which is, as he says, “one of the whitest white-collar professions in America.” You’ll also see plenty of proof, not just anecdotal, but some data to back it up. In the end I found this to be an enlightening and interesting read for me about an industry I’d have said I wasn’t that interested in, and yet it effects all of us and I found seeing how it functioned from an insiders perspective to be interesting.

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FYI:

Some adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 80-85,000 words

Review: The Potusgeists by Will Worsley

 Genre: Historical Fantasy/Satire

Description:

“The president is seeing ghosts!

Patty Pitypander is in way over her head. Somehow, she won the election—but the Oval Office is not what she expected. Neither are its grumpy ghosts, the Potusgeists, who view her as unqualified to be president.

When she refuses to heed their advice, dead presidents and first ladies spook her from the West Wing to the Blue Room. Blood drips down the walls, phantoms emerge out of nowhere, and William Howard Taft appears in her bathtub—naked!

The ghosts are not the only ones eager to foil her ambitious plans. Traitors lurk among the White House staff, dying to give her back a good stab—if Mrs. Lincoln doesn’t do it first.

Caught in a power struggle between the living and the dead, Patty must prove herself to both, or she’ll lose the presidency. Can she save herself in time?”

Author:

“Will Worsley began writing fiction full-time in 2016, after careers in publishing and investment management. As an editor at Time-Life Books, he wrote and edited articles on popular non-fiction topics ranging from history to home repair. As a money manager, he oversaw portfolios for large institutions and got the idea for his first satirical novel, Investing in Vain, named a top 10 business book of 2017 by Wealth Management magazine. He is a graduate of the University of Virginia, where he earned master’s degrees in English and business. Visit his website at willworsley.com”

Appraisal:

A different (at least from what I normally read), amusing, entertaining, and sometimes frustrating read. The frustrating part is that Patty Pitypander is, if not the most incompetent president ever (regardless of who you might think is next worst) then she’s got to be close. It’s not that she’s not capable. More that her priorities are messed up. But luckily the White House is full of spirits (okay, we’ll call them ghosts) of many presidents and first ladies who came before her. They’re there to help, whether she likes it or not. Will Patty get it together? Will she be able to deal with things, other than ghosts, who complicate things even more? It makes for a fun read that will keep you guessing.

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Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on an advance reviewer copy, so I can’t gauge the final product in this area.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 75-80,000 words

Review: Missing Walk by Melissa Bowersock

 Genre: Mystery

Description:

” With Christmas just a week away, Sam and Lacey are called to Albuquerque, New Mexico, to investigate the disappearance of a Navajo woman, and come face to face with the obstacles that prompted the MMIW movement—Missing and Murdered Indigenous Woman. With very little help from the police, they are forced to forge a trail of clues on their own, a trail that leads to surprising places, but at the end of it all, will they find joy… or tragedy?”

Author:

 “Melissa Bowersock is an eclectic, award-winning author who writes in a variety of fiction and non-fiction genres: paranormal, biography, western, action, romance, fantasy, spiritual, and satire.”

For more visit Ms.Bowersock’s website and follow her on Facebook.

Appraisal:

We’re up to 45 books in this series and while I haven’t read all of them, I’ve read quite a few, and always looking forward to the next one. They’re always fairly quick (novella size) and fun reads. With Sam Firecloud being a native it is common to see Native American history and culture being integrated into the story although with Sam’s ability to sense things, often (but now always) from spirits who are trapped in this world and need help getting to the next. Sam and Lacey are always asked to help solve some mystery and between their team work in putting the clues together and Sam’s supernatural abilities, they find a way to help. However, if you’ve been reading these books and thought you knew at a high level what to expect in every book going forward, this one breaks that pattern. It feels like it is going to follow the pattern at first, but ends up with a few twists that regular readers of the series won’t expect, while still staying true to what we’ve come to expect from the series. As I always feel after reading one of these, I love the read and am now eagerly awaiting the next one.

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Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 20-25,000 words

Review: Only Ann Knows by Baird Smart

 

Genre: Thriller

Description:

“A Horrible Accident or Brilliantly Planned Social Statement

Ann Miller still grieves deeply five months after her son and only child was killed during the Virginia Tech mass shooting. A lifelong gun rights advocate, she works passionately as an executive for a gun rights organization, the American Rifle Society.

One morning, Miller opens an anonymous package containing an AK-47 assault rifle sent to her ARS department. Entering an executive boardroom to deliver the assault weapon to her boss during a departmental meeting, she sprays 50 bullets in a matter of seconds killing 13 of her colleagues.

Two FBI agents with vastly different personalities and investigative approaches lead the ultra-high-profile investigation to determine if the mass shooting was a horrible accident as Miller contends or a brilliantly planned and executed mass murder to bring worldwide attention to the destructive capability of automatic and semi-automatic weapons like killed her son. As the FBI's investigation fails to uncover evidence that Miller pre-planned the shooting, the ARS spins the mass shooting events to characterize Miller as a mentally ill woman hellbent on avenging her son's death.

Having killed everyone in the boardroom, Miller stands trial for 13 first-degree murders as both the perpetrator and only witness. A surprise piece of evidence surfaces at the end of the trial which renders a verdict but still leaves questions unanswered.”

Author:

Baird Smart grew up in Winnetka, Illinois, a northern suburb of Chicago before leaving for college and eventually working in the TV industry in Los Angeles and Chicago and later working as a real estate broker in the Chicago area. This is his first novel.

Appraisal:

There are some parts of this novel that I like a ton, while there are other aspects that bothered me every step of the way while reading it. You may or may not react the same.

Let’s get the bad out of the way first.

One of the things I look for in books self-published or published by a small press is whether it received adequate proofreading. If I take note of too many issues while reading a book I’ll mention it if I see more than a handful and if it exceeds a certain number (okay, 20 if you care for the exact amount) then I’ll knock my review down to 3 stars or less, depending on other aspects of the book. This book didn’t hit that second number, but it was pushing it. The vast majority of the issues I flagged were homonyms, saying deep-seeded when it should be deep-seated, or summery (an adjective describing something as summer-like) instead of summary. Not to mention the “right to bare assault weapons” which I guess means that people may or may not be able to carry (aka bear) arms, but they have the right to take the clothes or covering off of their firearms.

I also thought the author had a tendency to describe things in way too much detail and flowery language, burning way too many words on description that is much more detailed than is typically needed. (Yeah, sometimes I’m guilty of being too wordy myself.) A short example is describing a room as containing “30x48-inch break-room tables.” Does the size really matter? This example is minor, but there are a lot more examples of this kind of thing, like describing a video playing on a “seventy-two-inch, rear-screen projection television surrounded by a semi-circle cluster of white hair and shiny bald heads.” A little bit of this, at times, may help to set the scene, but it reached the point where my brain was constantly saying “get on with the story.”

In spite of the issues above, I thought the foundational story of Ann and what happened, a mystery for all involved for much of the book, was very good. I think those of a particular political leaning might like this more than others, but it should be thought provoking for all. I’m glad I gave this a read in spite of the issues I had with the execution of telling the story.

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FYI:

Some adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

More proofreading issues than I like to see, but not quite enough to knock a star off due to this issue. See discussion in appraisal section for more details.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 80-85,000 words

Reprise Review: Election 2064 by Scott McDermott

 Genre: Science Fiction/Political Thriller

Description:

 “Nearly five decades from now, America is finding its legs again after years of bitter conflict. Civ-2, as the Second Civil War came to be known, turned many of the nation's cities into battlefields and took millions of lives. Early in the 2060 campaign, Reformation League candidate Acton Granger made an unprecedented concession – he would forego a running mate and offer the vice presidency to his chief rival, whomever that may become. It was a gesture of unity that rocketed Granger to victory. Still stinging from defeat, the Conservative League’s Elijah Schroeder chose to swallow his pride and accept Granger’s offer, alienating his own supporters and political allies in the process.

Now two years into their fragile partnership, the 2064 campaign looms, and Elijah learns his selection was more complicated than the call for healing he and the country were led to believe. He must decide whether to continue toiling as a false symbol of harmony, or turn against the man who is now his boss and leader of the free world.

Meanwhile, other national figures emerge with their own designs on the election, from the Freedom League’s rebellious darling Shelby Monroe to the Progressive League's technology mogul Ben Allen, who could become the country’s first gay president.

As each contender charts their strategies and the barnstorming begins, a terrorist attack – orchestrated by a new, horrifying weapon – rocks the nation and turns all of their campaigns upside-down.

That is, all of them but one.”

Author:

 “Scott McDermott lives in Virginia Beach with his wife and two furballs.”

Appraisal:

This is quite a story. I’m inclined to call it dystopian because it has a lot of the elements of that genre, specifically a political slant that looks at a current direction some are advocating or trying to take the country and projects the slippery slope of going too far that way. In this case that direction is using what’s often described as “big data” to predict how voters will react to certain things and politicians positioning their campaigns based on that. (Google “Robert Mercer” if you’re interested in learning more about this.) However, dystopian usually implies the opposite of a utopia, a world you wouldn’t want to live in. The US in 2064 when this story takes place is no utopia, but it isn’t a dystopia either. But the questions and concerns it raises if you read between the lines aren’t much different from what you’d expect in the dystopian genre. Maybe it’s dystopian lite as well as being a political thriller set in the not-so-distant future.

Those tuned in to the current political landscape will spot other similarities in this future world the author has imagined. But there are also some significant differences that are interesting food for thought, for example there have been changes that have happened, moving from a two-party system to a multi-party system with the parties called “leagues.” How politicians and voters react due to the recent second Civil War and some changes in the political divisions in the country (there are now something like 75 states) are a few of the changes.

Overall, I found this story a satisfying and thought-provoking read in the same way a well-done dystopian novel might be, but also with the same intensity that would come from a good political thriller. If you like one or the other, this should do. If you’re a fan of both genres, what are you waiting for? My only complaint is the cliffhanger ending which has left me wondering when book two will be out. I’m ready now.

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FYI:

Some adult language.

This is the first of a series.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues

Rating:***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 95-100,000 words

Review: Echoes by Phil Oddy

 

Genre: Dystopian Science Fiction

Description:

Estrel Beck steps off a train in the big city to go to an important meeting, and finds his unlovely, humdrum life going haywire. He is reliving the same day over and over, with no memory of any of the iterations. What will happen to him if he can’t break the loop? How did this happen to him, and why? There are people who seem to know him: are they friends or enemies? All he has are questions. And a few jottings on a disintegrating paper napkin.

Author:

Phil Oddy is a British author living in North Hertfordshire (which will only be a meaningful nugget for you, dear reader if, like me, you live in the UK). He juggles gainful employment, family and writing with volunteering for things like building websites for literary festivals, so he’s not afraid of much. Echoes is Book 1 of his trilogy ‘Entanglement’. Book 2 (Entrapment) is available and Book 3 (Eclipse) should be available this month (March, 2025). So since sending us Book 1 for review Oddy has finished and published two more books. He is really on a roll. If the ‘Entanglement’ trilogy floats your boat, you can binge all three.

Appraisal:

For this first book in the trilogy Oddy has developed a protagonist who is passive, unambitious and incompetent. In the opening chapters of the book he is a grumpy lump of unformed clay, constantly tired, never liking to complain, never wanting to be noticed. This, obviously, has to change as the book goes on. He never becomes 007. But he does discover some self-esteem. Nevertheless, if the book has a weakness it is Estrel Beck, because he is also the narrator, so we learn the whole story through him: he is wimpy, he vacillates, he repeats himself more often than the story can really bear, and he often contradicts himself. I rather wanted to give him a good shaking at points.

It is giving away nothing not in the blurb to tell you that the central quest for Beck is to stop looping. The people whom he meets and who appear to befriend him have other agendas, however. Sometimes Beck’s needs coincide with those of his friends: more often not.

Trinity is a dour city. Its people work hard but live dull, joyless lives. Oligarchs rule. Violence is meted out by these alpha-dogs. There is also in-fighting between them. There is a resistance movement attempting to take down the cynical government. Much of the book is concerned with these various machinations, into which Beck is drawn, spat out, and drawn in again – all the while the plotting cleverly keeps his tatty but oh-so important paper napkin to the fore. This part of the book is pacy stuff. It begins to look as though Beck has a role in the revolution, despite not knowing there was one until he started looping. Will he finally find his niche in life?

One thing irked me from the moment the character appeared. Clar is consistently referred to as ‘they’. This leads to some tortuous prose and occasionally spills over onto other characters in a most confusing way. No reason for this clunky exposition is ever offered. You will have to draw your own conclusions.

In summary, the book has an intriguing premise. It ends in a satisfying way, while still providing a goodly set up for two more volumes to come.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

Some adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: *** Three Stars

Reviewed by: Judi Moore

Approximate word count: 80-85,000 words