Showing posts with label Ghost Story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Ghost Story. Show all posts

Wednesday, April 10, 2019

Review: Widely Scattered Ghosts by Malcolm R. Campbell



Genre: Magical Realism/Ghosts/Short Stories

Description:

“A readers’ advisory for this collection of nine stories forecasts widely scattered ghosts with a chance of rain. Caution is urged at the following uncertain places: an abandoned mental hospital, the woods behind a pleasant subdivision, a small fishing village, a mountain lake, a long-closed theater undergoing restoration, a feared bridge over a swampy river, a historic district street at dusk, the bedroom of a girl who waited until the last minute to write her book report from an allegedly dead author, and the woods near a conjure woman’s house.

In effect from the words ‘light of the harvest moon was brilliant’ until the last phrase ‘forever rest in peace,’ this advisory includes—but may not be limited to—the Florida Panhandle, northwest Montana, central Illinois, and eastern Missouri.”

Author:

“Malcolm R. Campbell is the author of magical realism and fantasy…His work has appeared in The Lascaux Prize 2014 Anthology, Spirits of St. Louis: Missouri Ghost Stories Anthology, ‘Quail Bell Magazine,’ ‘A View inside Glacier National Park: 100 years, 100 Stories,’ ‘Future Earth Magazine,’ ‘The Smoking Poet Magazine,’ ‘Nonprofit World Magazine,’ ‘Nostalgia Magazine,’ and ‘Living Jackson Magazine.’

His fantasy novels were inspired by Glacier Park Montana where he worked as a bellman and from a tour of duty aboard an aircraft carrier during the Vietnam War.

He grew up in the Florida Panhandle, a wondrous place often called ‘the other Florida’ and ‘the forgotten coast,’ that was the perfect environment for growing up and learning about writing and magical realism.”

You can learn more about Mr. Campbell”s books on his website, or follow him on Facebook.

Appraisal:

Widely Scattered Ghosts begins with Moonlight and Ghosts: A couple visits an old abandoned mental hospital and development center at night, to quell some troubling dreams. This story draws you in quickly and kept me on tenterhooks until the very end. It had the right amount of tension to be spooky and just enough heart to leave a smile on my face.

Map Maker: Emily is a seventh-grade girl who sees and communes with spirits. She enjoys exploring in the woods behind her family’s house and her territory has expanded to the abandoned ruins of an estate. Her father, Martin (a civil engineer) made her a personal, poster-sized street map of the area and she enjoys adding her own personal touches. The woods behind her house, which the abandoned estate sits on, she has named The Ancient and Sacred Forest on her map. Her father tells her that area is in danger of being bulldozed and sold off as lots for a new subdivision.

Sweetbay Magnolia: Emily is visiting her grandmother, who lives a few blocks away. Granny is missing her almost forever home down by the river. Later that day Emily accompanies her father to an out of town meeting. The conversation between father and daughter is engaging, entertaining, and humorous. Father leaves Emily with the truck and keys to enjoy the river and the dock as he goes to his meeting. It’s twilight and foggy which is ripe for ghosts and spirits who reveal some intimate family secrets about granny’s past. The story is compelling and engaging.

High County Painter: Emily’s family takes a vacation to a mountain resort with a lake and hiking trails. Emily communes with nature spirits and learns a little magic. It’s a little unclear if this is a dream or actually happened. It’s a fun story.

The Opera House Ghosts: This is a hoot of an adventure that includes its own ghost story. Emily’s father is helping with the restoration of an old opera house. So, while he is away with meetings, we finally get to spend some time with Emily’s mom, Sarah, as they explore the old unique theater with lots of history and colorful spirits. Emily is growing into her own, she is fourteen in this story and refuses to take guff from anyone, alive or dead.

Cora’s Crossing: A spirit is awakened on a haunted bridge to aid a young woman. This is a gripping tale with some unsuspecting friends who get lost in the heavy fog. John and Randy end up with quite a tale to tell if they dare.

The Lady of the Blue Hour: A spirit story of a different kind. The story starts out a little puzzling as we are brought up to speed of a spirit running amok. A heartwarming tale of one soul of a tragedy. Don’t tell anyone, but, Kenneth has a little crush on Melinda.

Patience, I Presume: Prudence Lowe is a college student living at home. She needs to read the book she has chosen and write a book report on it which is due the following day. When the blowing snow knocks out the electricity strange things start happening in her room. It just so happens that the author of the book she chose to read used to live down the street and around the corner when she was alive. There is a rumor that the author actually channeled a spirit for her stories. Prudence’s interest is piqued beyond being prudent. The characters are engaging, entertaining, and a little spooky.

Haints in the Woods: This story is told by Lena, mostly. Eulalie is fit to be tied. It shouldn’t take Willie all afternoon to get a quart of milk from the Mercantile. The haints are flying since the graveyard has been relocated. When Pollyanna shows up with a crate full of bridal shower gifts for Eulalie, since there was no bridal shower. While sitting on the back porch, Pollyanna and Eulalie get soused on Eulalie’s best moonshine. Since Eulalie needs a distraction from her anger the crate of gifts turns out to be the perfect solution. The crate and Pollyanna worked its magic, and Eulalie declared Pollyanna down right shameful.

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FYI:

Some of these short stories have been previously published, but are now out of print.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Approximate word count: 40-45,000 words

Monday, June 12, 2017

Review: Star Walk by Melissa Bowersock


Genre: Mystery/Supernatural/Ghosts

Description:

“Ex-cop Lacey Fitzpatrick and Navajo medium Sam Firecloud are working a new investigation into paranormal activity. This time they’re called to clear an old Hollywood mansion of the multiple ghostly tenants that are threatening the home owner’s livelihood. At the same time, however, Lacey gets a call from her ex-boyfriend, now prison inmate, for help in a more earthly manner. He fears his sister is siphoning money from his elderly mother, and only Lacey can find out the truth. Between saving her ex’s mother from bankruptcy and researching deep into the families of the tortured souls haunting the mansion, Lacey finds the revelations of family dynamics to be both fatally flawed and heartbreakingly inspired.”

Author:

“Melissa Bowersock is an eclectic, award-winning author who writes in a variety of fiction and non-fiction genres: biography, contemporary, western, action, romance, fantasy, paranormal and spiritual. She has been both traditionally and independently published and is a regular contributor to the superblog Indies Unlimited. She lives in a small community in northern Arizona with her husband and an Airedale terrier. She also writes under the pen name Amber Flame.”

Learn more about Ms. Bowersock on her website or follow her onFacebook.

Appraisal:

An old haunted Hollywood mansion is being rejuvenated and the owner has enlisted Sam Firecloud’s help in clearing the spirits out. To do this he needs Lacey Fitzpatrick’s investigative skills to figure out who is haunting the mansion. Sam feels two different spirits who are haunting different areas of the house and both have stories to tell, which date back to the early days of Hollywood.

I loved the way this story unfolds. It was like watching a mystery on screen with clips of old black and white movie footage from the past as Lacey pieces together what’s going on. And since Lacey and Sam both have day jobs they could only be at the house on the weekends. That was frustrating to me, like having to watch commercial’s, because I couldn’t fast-forward through their week. I know Lacy needed time to do research and then let her findings stew in her head while she tried to fit the pieces of the puzzle together, but still…

I like the way Lacey and Sam are starting to read each other better. It’s like they are syncing. There is a lot more story here than the ghosts and Ms. Bowersock is able to seamlessly weave in a story arc that involves Lacey’s ex-fiancĂ©, who is still serving time in prison. I also appreciate the inclusion of Sam’s two children and what’s going on in their lives. This brings a realistic feel of family to the whole series. Nicely done, Ms. Bowersock. I am really enjoying this series and looking forward to Dream Walk.

My dream for Lacey and Sam to both become independently wealthy so their ghostbusting could be a fulltime job together. I know that is not very realistic but I am a paranormal romance lover… 

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FYI:

Star Walk is the third book in A Lacey Fitzpatrick and Sam Firecloud Mystery series. Book one is Ghost Walk, book two is Skin Walk. Each of these mysteries could be read as a standalone if you choose. However, I am enjoying the relationship developing between Lacey and Sam and recommend reading from the beginning to get the full benefit of this storyline.

Format/Typo Issues:

My review is based on a beta, pre-release version. I am unable to judge the final version in this area.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Approximate word count: 40-45,000 words

Monday, August 25, 2014

Ever Lost (Secret Affinity Book 2) / Melissa MacVicar


Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Genre: Young Adult/ Paranormal/ Ghost Story

Approximate word count: 60-65,000 words

Availability    
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Author:

“Melissa MacVicar lives on Nantucket Island with her husband and two children. She is a full-time teacher who loves classic rock, watching football, and reading anything that is romantic and suspenseful.”

Find out more about her at her website or stalk her on Facebook.

Description:

“New town, new school, new ghost.

Jade has a dedicated boyfriend, an overprotective mom, and a full scholarship. Uprooted from Nantucket, Jade is installed off-island at her dad’s new house so she can attend snobby Layton Academy. Leaving Charlie behind is sheer torment, but living with her father has plenty of dangerous distraction—in the form of a terrifying spirit haunting her new school. Hottie classmate Mateo Fernandez can’t see the ghost, but he knows its story. He’d like to know hers, too, but Jade still misses Charlie, even though distance seems to be changing him.

With support from Mateo and the mysterious Noemie, Jade commits to helping the agonized spirit cross over. As she delves into the ghost’s past, the disturbing secrets Jade learns draw her into a deadly confrontation with a desperate man. If she can’t play his demented game, the spirit’s harrowing fate could become her own.”

Appraisal:

This story is told through multiple first person points of view that are clearly marked at the beginning of each chapter. The main characters are well developed and the dialogue between the students sounds believable. Of course the ghost doesn’t waste any time appearing to Jade and she seems a little better equipped to deal with him than she was in the first book. However, she is trying to adapt to a new school environment and make new friends.

The plot moves along at a decent pace as Jade fumbles around looking for a mentor to help her with the ghost since her Grandma Irving is too busy taking care of her sick Papa. Then there is the distraction of Mateo, the hottie who has taken an interest Jade. However she is still hung-up on her new step-brother, Charlie. This is one reason why Jade is now living with her father and enrolled in Layton Academy, a private school in Manchester. Luckily Jade finds a suitable mentor in Noemie before the plot takes a frightening turn.

I did find Jade a little more personable in this story, her narrating was interspersed with more dialogue which made the story easier to relate to. Noemie is an interesting character and she seems to have a lot to teach Jade. I hope she will be around for a while because she added a dimension that had been alluded to by Jade’s Gram in Ever Near and needed to be explored further. This opens up new possibilities for things to get very interesting or troubling for Jade in future stories. 

FYI:

Even though this is the second book in Secret Affinity series, Ever Lost could be read as a stand-alone. Any facts that you may need to know from Ever Near are repeated in this story for the readers’ convenience.

Format/Typo Issues:

I read an Advanced Reader Copy and I found no significant editing or proofing errors.


Rating: **** Four stars
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Friday, July 25, 2014

The Number of the House is 13 / T. R. Sutherland


Reviewed by: BigAl

Genre: Horror/Ghost Story/Short Story

Approximate word count: 6-7,000 words

Availability    
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Author:

In her day job T.R. Sutherland is a computer programmer. She lives in Florida with her husband and their dog.

Description:

“On this street the house was number 13.

For two adventurous cousins, the reputation this house has acquired is based on rumor, and they're determined to find out if there is any truth in it. They decide to explore the house to see for themselves what all the fuss is about. As soon as they approach the house, they become aware of a menacing presence. Their plan was to spend the entire night in the house, but with each passing moment the house slowly comes alive as a cold terror creeps in.

Will they make it through the night?”

Appraisal:

I thought this short story started out well. A haunted house is a premise that’s been done before, which means originality is harder to find, yet it is also so well known that the setup is easy. This story started out feeling like one of those tall tales you might relate while sitting around a campfire late at night only with more detail and better descriptions.

The narrator (who I don’t think was ever named) and his cousin, Jett, set off to explore the haunted house. The foundation was set, the tension was building, and then I started seeing holes in the story. A room was described as having thirteen walls, which set my mind off on a tangent, trying to picture how that could be and how plausible it was. One second it is so dark that Jett was groping in the dark, trying to find a candle that had gone out, and the next they’re able to see the detail of the candle well enough to see that it had been “stuffed out” with someone or something pushing the wick into the melted wax rather than blown out. Later they sense two “persons” (presumably ghosts) “with the slightest possible distance between them” go by, yet in the next breath the beings have changed directions with the follower “steadily getting closer.” (I thought they were just as close together as possible.)

A ghost story, like any story containing things most of us are certain don’t exist, requires a reader to suspend disbelief. Usually I’m able. Here, with things I couldn’t picture and what seemed like one sentence contradicting the next, I wasn’t able.

The story ends with the narrator making the statement that he wonders “what was reality and what was nervous delusion.” Unfortunately I was wondering the same thing, only way too early.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues


Rating: *** Three stars

Friday, May 9, 2014

The Motel Room: A Ghost Story/ Alyssa Cooper


Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Genre: Ghost Story/ Contemporary Fiction/ Short Story

Approximate word count: 8-9,000 words

Availability    
Kindle  US: YES  UK: YES  Nook: NO  Smashwords: NO  Paper: NO
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Author:

“Alyssa Cooper was born in Belleville Ontario, and has lived in Canada for her entire life. Writing and art have been her greatest passions since she was a child, and she has dedicated her life to perfecting her skills and pushing the limits of her craft. She is currently working as a graphic designer in Belleville, where she lives with her typewriter and her personal library.”

Ms. Cooper “is the author of three traditionally published books, Salvation, Benjamin, and Cold Breath of Life. The Motel Room is her first foray into independent publishing.”

You can learn more about Alyssa Cooper on her website or follow her on Facebook.

Description:

“The Motel Room is a new take on the classic ghost story, telling the tale of a haunted motel room from the perspective of the haunter, rather than the haunted.

Since his death, our Narrator has been trapped in a motel room, watching the comings and goings of his nightly guests. The strangers never stay more than a night or two, and they never pay him any mind. Then one morning, a maid turns her head and the two lock eyes - the first time he has been seen since his death. Only then does he begin to discover the true power behind his ghostly form.” 

Appraisal:

After reading this story, if I ever have the feeling of being watched I am sure to think there is a ghost hiding in the corner keeping his eyes on me. The ghost narrating this story isn't given a name, he has a sad and miserable existence with no sense of time as the years pass by. Although he has some beautiful memories of his wedding and a loving wife to help him through. They were both young and in love celebrating their first anniversary when tragedy struck.

Alyssa Cooper has written a unique and insightful perspective from her ghost's point of view with some wonderfully descriptive prose. I have to say that when the light bulb came on and I realized how well and truly trapped this ghost was in that miserable motel room, I was horrified! We really have no idea how powerful our brains are on a spiritual level and we will most likely never know. But there is no denying that we can be selfish without realizing how hurtful that might be to others, living or not.

I highly recommend this short story for anyone who has lost a loved one.  We also need to remember that we can let them go and still relish their memories.

Format/Typo Issues:

I found no significant issues with editing. The author is from Canada and may have used some Canadian spellings, honestly I didn't even notice.


Rating: **** Four Stars

Thursday, February 27, 2014

Sunspots / Karen S. Bell


Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Genre: Literary Fiction/ Contemporary/ Ghost Story

Approximate word count: 100-105,000 words

Availability    
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Author:

“Karen S. Bell continues to be in awe of the magical and wondrous phenomenon called life. As an observer and obvious participant in feminine values and approach to our human challenges, she brings this perspective to her work. Fascinated by the mysteries of the unseen forces that perhaps play a role in guiding our choices, she continues to search for answers in the mundane as well as in the cosmic forces that surround us. She is working on her third novel and lives in Ponte Vedra, Fl. with her husband and their two furry kids.”

To find out more about her and her other books check out her website or blog.

Description:

“Sunspots is personal. A personal journey of grieving, a personal journey of self-discovery, and a personal journey geographically. A young woman from Brooklyn, Aurora, a man from Austin, Texas, Jake, meet accidentally in NYC and it changes the trajectory of their lives...But after the honeymoon, reality sets in and she realizes that marriage can be isolating, and that the socio-economic differences between her and Jake can become a wedge... Fast forward two years, and Aurora finds herself a widow... And then her journey becomes one of accepting the harsh reality of encounters with Jake's ghost… Viola, a ghost who has a connection with Aurora's past, leads her [through these episodes not of this world]... Sometimes from the ashes, sometimes from blackness awaits the brilliant light of a life of happiness.”

Appraisal:

This book was a tough one for me to get through. I am not a lover of literary fiction. It often seems like pretentious drivel to me.  This style uses way too many descriptive words to make a point or get the message across.  Plus there is never really any plot to speak of, just days in the life of... Sunspots was like this for me. It was all I could do to pick the book back up again each day, up until the last ten or fifteen percent of the book when the story actually started moving forward.

I understood that Aurora had aspirations to be an actress of stage and film who related events of her life to them. However in telling her story Ms. Bell made numerous references to actors, television soap operas, movie titles, and other famous literary works (ancient to contemporary) throughout this story. It starts off pretty innocuous but becomes overkill after a while with overusage numbing my brain and actually causing my eyes to roll. Honestly, I felt like Ms. Bell's descriptive prose was skilled enough to manage the scenes without using the pop-culture and literary references so much.

Underneath all the pompous blather there is a good story here. Beyond all the Gothic reverie, depression, and malignant obsession Aurora is going through, you would be challenged to find a more flawed character. There is a positive message of being able to make it beyond the darkness of your life. If you can manage to stick with the story through all the time hopping as she remembers, relives, and tries to reorganize her life to see it through to the end.

If you enjoy Literary Fiction about women’s issues, Aurora's journey is a unique one that you may enjoy. This book just wasn't for me, the ghosts pulled me in, but they weren't enough to satisfy me.

Format/Typo Issues:

I found no significant errors in editing or formatting.


Rating: *** Three stars

Friday, December 13, 2013

Voodoo Love And The Curse of Jean Lafitte's Treasure / Victoria Richards


Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Genre: Paranormal Romance /Romantic Suspense /Ghost

Approximate word count: 35-40,000 words

Availability    
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Author:

“Victoria Richards is a native southern Californian. She is married and a stay-at-home mom of two beautiful daughters. She holds two degrees, one in Liberal Arts and the other in History... Her other interests include traveling, painting, shopping, volleyball, jogging at the beach, and enjoying a good game of billiards.” 

To learn more visit her website.

Description:

In the small town of Barataria Bay, Louisiana, Elizabeth Brown is struggling to remember the past. Two years ago she lost her lover and her memory on a quest to find a long lost treasure guarded by a voodoo curse.
When Elizabeth's life is interrupted by a ghostly visit from Juan Carlos, she finds herself once again plunged into unwanted intrigue. With his help, her memory of the past begins to come back.

Appraisal:

The opening scene in this story is sure to grab you and not let you go. Then the story jumps ahead two years and we learn how Elizabeth's life has changed and how she is coping with her loss of Juan Carlos. There is a powerful voodoo curse at play in her life she is entirely unaware of. Most of the story is told in first person and we get to watch as the scenes unfold and her memory starts to return. Several players are not who they seem and there is at least one extremely vile villain who insinuates himself throughout the story.

The plot is fast moving and captivating, interwoven with bits and pieces of voodoo history and rituals. The story is suspenseful and full of intrigue as Elizabeth's memory starts to return and we get to know more around the series of events that happened when she lost her memory. The lore and curse surrounding Jean Lafitte's treasure was what captured me the most.

While I enjoyed the story and the characters were well defined, I had a little trouble keeping a connection with Elizabeth. I empathized with her character, she had a smart wit about her. I liked the way she justified carrying a gun in her purse. She had a strength of character that I am not sure I would have had in her position. One of her biggest strengths of character comes at the end of the book where there are some twists in the story that make this a fully satisfying read.

FYI:

There are adult sexual situations, mild language, and one F-bomb.

Format/Typo Issues:

I came across a small number of proofing errors but nothing that threw me out of the story.


Rating: **** Four stars

Friday, November 15, 2013

The House on Persimmon Road / Jackie Weger


Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Genre: Romance / Ghost Story

Approximate word count: 75-80,000 words

Availability    
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Author:

Jackie Weger “…began writing romance novels in the 1980's while living in a small farming town in Texas and is an award-winning contemporary romance writer. She published sixteen novels with Harlequin Books and is now bringing her five-star favorites to the e-book community.”

To learn more about Ms. Weger visit her blog and/or her Facebook page, she loves to chat with readers.

Description:

“Lottie Roberts is restless and lonely. She's been sitting on her bones for decades, waiting for her ticket to heaven until... Justine Hale and her family take up residence in Lottie's two-hundred-year-old plantation house.”

Trying to make a fresh start after her husband leaves her Justine moves her family to Alabama. Which include not only her eleven year-old son and eight year-old daughter, but also her bankrupt mother and sharp-tongued ex-mother-in-law.

Justine needs help and Lottie is of a mind to provide it. But before Lottie can say squat and Justine even unlocks the front door, Tucker Highsmith shows up to steal her thunder. His dark eyes, lazy grin, and sexy Alabama drawl coupled with the dern braggart's Mr. Fix-it talents just might be the answer to all of Justine's problems. Or maybe not...”

Appraisal:

With Ms. Weger's easy going writing style you are able to get a clear picture of the characters in this story from the onset. Justine is overwhelmed with the responsibility of raising her children and refereeing between her two mothers who nitpick at each other constantly. I found it easy to sympathize with Justine, she is smart, level-headed, and practical. She has her work cut out for her. 

Her mother, Pauline, was pampered high-society until the death of her husband and her livelihood is now tied up in bankruptcy court. In all of her aristocratic ways, she too is trying to find her place in the world. Now in her sixties, she wants to learn to drive a car and get a job. While Agnes Hale, Justine's ex-mother-in-law, sets her sights on a couple of different prizes.

Tucker Highsmith is their closest new neighbor. He lets himself get pulled into helping this eclectic family move in and settle against Justine's wishes. Tucker is drawn to Justine more than any woman he has ever met, but has enough responsibility of his own to deal with so he has no intention of getting involved with Justine. However both find themselves expertly manipulated by Pauline. 

Lottie, our resident ghost, wants her body back.  Her dearest wish is to be alive once again, to be whole, and be able to be seen and heard again. She is pretty sure she is not all the way dead because no one ever found her bones and she was never properly buried. She concocts a harebrained plan she is sure will work to bring her back from betwixt and between. 

This story is an enjoyable three-ring circus. The human characters in this story are believable, the conversations and the dilemmas ring true. It was fun to watch Tucker and Justine work through and break down the barriers each had constructed to protect themselves from further heartbreak. The plot moved smoothly and had a good pace. Ms. Weger's stories seem to have a different sort of flavor to them than your typical romance novel that I have found I enjoy.

Format/Typo Issues:

I do believe this story would benefit from another round of proofing. I found a small number of proofing errors.


Rating: **** Four Stars

Tuesday, November 5, 2013

Stone's Ghost / Melissa Bowersock


Reviewed by: ?wazithinkin

Genre: Ghost Story / Contemporary Fiction

Approximate word count: 55-60,000 words

Availability    
Kindle  US: YES  UK: YES  Nook: NO  Smashwords: NO  Paper: YES
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Author:

“Melissa Bowersock is an eclectic, award-winning writer who turns her hand to any kind of story that moves her, be it contemporary, western, fantasy, romance, action/adventure, spiritual, satire or biography. She has written ten novels and one non-fiction and has been both traditionally published and self-published. She also writes under the name of Amber Flame.”

Ms. Bowersock is also a contributing author at IndiesUnlimited learn more about her at her website and follow her blog.

Description:

“Matthew Stone doesn't believe in ghosts … until he meets one. He owns a successful business in Lake Havasu, Arizona, home to the famed London Bridge that was brought over stone by stone and rebuilt over the Colorado River. He has a gorgeous girlfriend, a doting mother, and more money than he needs, but no time for stories about the ghosts who were transplanted from England with the famed bridge. When a chance encounter with a female ghost leads to unexpected friendship, Matt and the ghost are forced to rely on each other as they confront the pasts that haunt them.”

Appraisal:

This is an interesting character study that just happens to include a ghost. Matthew Stone is coasting through life almost in a sleep walk. He is so deep in denial that he doesn't even realize how far gone he is. When life circumstances and a ghost force him to look at his life more honestly, he loses his sense of balance.

I liked how Ms. Bowersock explored Matthew's selfish, self-centered tendencies and then allowed us to see enough of his childhood to understand why he was this way. He was a nice enough guy who didn't realize how anti-social he had become until he is faced with losing the woman that he loves. I had a hard time liking or sympathizing with his character.

Janie, our ghost, was an interesting character who has a spiritual aspect without bringing in religious views. Janie seems to be the only one who can get Matthew to consider breaking down the walls to allow introspection of his life. I felt more empathy for her than I did Matthew. The fact that I felt more empathy for all of the female characters than any of the male characters probably says more about me than the book itself.

Every character was well developed and the story is told through Matthew’s eyes so we get a male-centric perspective of all of his relationships; from his mother, to his absentee father, to his girlfriend, and his employees, which was interesting.  The dialogue was well written and believable. I found this to be a thought provoking read.

FYI:

There was a small amount of adult language. Any sex was behind closed doors.

Format/Typo Issues:

I noticed no editing issues at all.


Rating: **** Four stars