Showing posts with label Thriller. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Thriller. Show all posts

Sunday, June 7, 2026

Review: Show Yourself by Shane Pollard


 Genre: Thriller/Suspense

Description:

“Walking home on a summer evening, Tristan's eleven-year-old goddaughter runs ahead to hide and scare the group. A warm breeze filters through the city streets. She turns down an alley and tucks behind an old dumpster unaware of the stranger. Tristan's best friend, James, jogs ahead of the group to catch his daughter at her own game.

James reaches the alley and turns the corner. The stranger draws a knife. In the seconds it takes for James to collapse, the worlds of those closest to him change forever.

Tristan becomes Jenavieve's guardian. He makes her breakfast, argues with the PTA, and teaches her to cook. He also learns to disappear into crowds, lines the trunk of his car with plastic, and quietly begins hunting a killer that no one has been able to find.

Sharp, warm, and darkly funny, Show Yourself builds to a conclusion that will make you hold your breath. Shane Pollard's debut asks not just who did it, but what you would be willing to become to make it right.

This is not a revenge story. It's a story about what it means to be alive.”

Author:

“Shane Pollard decided at a very young age that he was going to work for NASA. But when an accident in his teens forced him to take time off from school to recover, his plans changed. He instead took the incredibly straightforward path of chasing his own curiosity half-way around the world, and back, a few times. Throughout his travels, Shane taught sailing, English, illustration, and critical thinking. He sold his photography and paintings, and pushed pixels and words as a graphic designer and copy writer. He mixed drinks professionally, spent a few years underwater as a commercial Divemaster, did technical shenanigans for an electric boat company, became an engineer for a 3D printing company, and wrote a novel that he is currently trying to convince people to read.”

Appraisal:

This story gives the reader lots to think about, wondering how you’d react if you found yourself in a comparable situation to what the protagonist of this story, Tristan, did. There are multiple threads that explore different aspects of what Tristan and his goddaughter Jenavieve go through after the murder of Jenavieve's father James, and Tristan subsequently becoming her guardian. Not to mention wondering who murdered James, whether others are in danger with him uncaught, and who he might be. The police don’t seem to be getting anywhere, maybe James can figure it out. But if he does, then what? It all makes for an intense story that I couldn’t put down.

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FYI:

Some adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 45-50,000 words

Monday, May 18, 2026

Review: Painting Over Cracks by Lee Bukowski


 

Genre: Crime Fiction/Suspense/Thriller/Women’s Fiction

Description:

“Beth Collins lives her life shadowed by a secret, one she believes she can outrun by building a perfect family of her own with her attorney husband, Danny. And for a while, it seems she has—until a freak car accident kills Danny and shatters her world in an instant.

Desperate for a fresh start, Beth quits her job as a mortgage broker and buys a café. As she settles into the rhythm of her new life, she finds unexpected friendships, a sense of purpose, and eventually, even the spark of a new romance.

But when mysterious details about the crash emerge, leading to shocking secrets about her husband, Beth sets off on a search for answers. Every revelation pulls her deeper into a world she could not have imagined and forces her to confront the unthinkable—she’s mourning a man who never existed. When the illusion she’s relied on collapses, Beth must decide what future she wants and who the woman is she’s ready to become.”

Author:

“Lee Bukowski lives in Reading, Pennsylvania. When she’s not writing, she loves reading, traveling, and trying cocktails with creative names. She’s also a self-proclaimed Billy Joel superfan with a live concert count of fifty shows. She is the award-winning fiction author of A Week of Warm Weather, her debut, and Painting Over Cracks.”

Appraisal:

I loved this book. Beth, the protagonist has had her life disrupted in extremely disturbing ways, starting with the car accident that kills her husband and fetus that she hadn’t even told her husband about yet. As she struggles to get her life back on a path that feels right to her, she keeps running into things she couldn’t have anticipated and has to figure out the situation and how to deal with it. You’ve got a few mysteries and a whole lot of suspense through all of these threads, but are pulling for Beth all the way as you wonder what life’s going to throw at her next.

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FYI:

A small amount of adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

Although the review is based on an advance reviewer version I spotted no issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 85-90,000 words

Friday, April 17, 2026

Review: Where Nobody Knows Her Name by Lynn M. Dannheisser


 

Genre: Thriller

Description:

“Beneath the turquoise waters of the Florida Keys, something sinister waits…

When the body of Bonita Key’s former attorney washes ashore in Pine Cay, Layla Leslie’s new job as the village attorney takes a chilling turn. Drawn in by the village’s charm, sun drenched beaches, and a magnetic county sheriff—Layla thought she’d found her dream escape from the scandal she’d left behind in Miami.

But Bonita Key hides more than just tropical secrets.

As Layla digs deeper, she stumbles into a tangled web of vanishing locals, offshore accounts, and a criminal network hiding in plain sight. With whispers of trafficking and corruption echoing through the village’s charming façade, trust becomes a luxury she can’t afford. Even with a relentless Miami Herald reporter by her side, the truth stays just out of reach—and someone is watching her every move.

The last attorney tried to expose the truth. Layla may not live long enough to finish the job.”

Author:

A retired attorney who had previously written a non-fiction book, Lynn M Dannheisser splits her time between the mountains of western Massachusetts and Miami, Florida. For more from Ms Dannheisser check out her website and follow her on Facebook.

Appraisal:

A disclaimer prior to the beginning of the story makes it clear that the specific location where most of the events take place in this book and the characters are fictional and that if “you find any such resemblance, it is in your imagination, as it was in mine.” Given the opinion many have of some Floridian politicians and since the author is an attorney making that clear was obviously a good idea. That said, if your opinion of politics in that piece of the US hanging off the southeastern part of the country is less than ideal, it makes the events in this book that much easier to believe.

When she’s hired as the village attorney for a small town in the Florida Keys, Layla Leslie (yes, she gets plenty of jokes based on the song) thinks she’s escaping to a more laidback and scenic environment than what she is leaving behind in Miami. What she finds is disconcerting, hard to figure out, and puts her in a position where there doesn’t seem to be any good way out. How, or if, this story resolves keeps the reader guessing to the very end. An intense, fascinating, and all-too-credible (in spite of being complete fiction) tale that once you get into it is hard to put down.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

Some adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on an ARC (advance reviewer copy), so I can’t gauge the final product in this area.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 90-95,000 words

Thursday, April 9, 2026

Review: The Barbie Killer by Julia McDermott


 Genre: Thriller

Description:

“When Dolly Garner’s husband is transferred to the small town of Huntington, Kansas, she hates the thought of uprooting their young family and starting over a thousand miles away. But after a year of living on savings and credit cards after Tim’s previous lay-off, refusing to move is out of the question. So they sell their home, pack their bags, and focus on the positives: wholesome Midwestern values, a lower cost of living, and less crime.

But Dolly’s first impressions are not good. The people seem standoffish, unfriendly, and tight-lipped. The women she meets are materialistic and obsessed with status. More unsettling, Dolly learns that years ago, a brutal murder took place on the property where her family’s home now stands, and the case was never solved.

When a violent crime shocks the community, the town secret is out: A serial killer is on the loose and preying on the women of Huntington. As paranoia surges and the line between neighbor and predator blurs, Dolly realizes she can’t trust anyone in this town.

Inspired by true events, this twist-filled thriller will leave you breathless until the final page.”

Author:

“Julia McDermott was born in Dallas, raised in Atlanta, and earned a degree in Economics and French from the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill, including a junior year in France. Afterward, she moved to Texas, married her college sweetheart, and worked in finance and technology. While raising four children, she pivoted to full-time writing and has participated in literary festivals and writers’ conferences across the U.S. and Canada.”

Appraisal:

Moving from a big city, specifically Atlanta, to a small town in Kansas, the reasonable assumption is that odds of you being murdered are going to decrease. And they would, unless that small town has a serial killer who the townspeople don’t like to talk about, so new people don’t find out until they’re already moved to town. That’s what happens to Dolly Garner and her husband. Now what should they do? None of the potential answers are very good and the more they find out about what’s going on, the scarier it becomes. How this all resolves and the pieces to the mystery behind the killer make for an intense and interesting read that readers who enjoy thrillers should love.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on an advance reviewer copy, so I can’t gauge the final product in this area.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 55-60,000 words

Friday, January 2, 2026

Review: Treacherous Hack by Kevin G. Chapman


 Genre: Mystery/Thriller

Description:

“When electronics store owner Lou Palazzo is gunned down at a snowy Manhattan intersection, NYPD homicide detectives Mike Stoneman and Jason Dickson catch a case that’s anything but ordinary. Back at Lou’s shop, two Chinese nationals linked to a powerful Shanghai cybercrime ring are dead. The only clue? A missing laptop computer, possibly containing something Lou was willing to die to protect.

Meanwhile, NYU student Ryan Gelb is panicking. His hacked laptop held the stolen university data — data he quietly gave to his Uncle Lou. Now Lou is dead, and whoever killed him is coming for the file. . . and for Ryan.

Caught between international cybercriminals, New York mobsters, and the police, Ryan is desperate to recover the file and avoid being expelled — or worse, executed.”

Author:

A lawyer specializing in labor and employment law by day, Kevin Chapman describes his real passions as playing tournament poker, rooting for the New York Mets, and writing fiction. For more, visit Mr Chapman’s website.

Appraisal:

I’ve read several of the books in the Mike Stoneman Thriller series of which this is the latest, and I’ve liked all of them I’ve read. Of course while they have the same main characters, Mike Stoneman and his partner Jason Dickson, they have unique aspects in each. In this one we not only get the story of Mike and Jason trying to figure out the murder of pawn shop owner Lou Palazzo, but another story thread with Lou’s nephew, Ryan trying to find some data that he shouldn’t have had, but passed on to his Uncle Lou. We’ve also got some interesting characters involved that … I’m not sure the word incestuous is the best word to describe things, but it’s got to be close with people with ties to the main characters complicating things for all concerned. Even though the reader knows a lot of things that the characters don’t know, this kept me on the edge of my seat and guessing all the way. An interesting and different story.

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FYI:

Some adult language.

Although this book is part of a series each book in the series stands alone, so reading prior books in the series or the order you choose to read each book doesn’t matter.

Format/Typo Issues:

Based on an advance reviewer copy although based on that there were no significant issues.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 85-90,000 words

Wednesday, December 24, 2025

Review: Cross Checking by Dennis Pierce


 

Genre: Mystery/Thriller

Description:

“A search for hidden treasure linked to a decades-old crime. A race against time to stop a fanatical church leader’s murderous plot. A well-educated mob boss who stands in the way of one of these goals—and could be the key to achieving the other.

In Cross Checking, book 2 of the Parker Hanson mystery series, former journalist turned private investigator Parker Hanson and Amalia Velasquez, his ex-Army Ranger neighbor, are back with not one but two major mysteries to solve.

When they aren’t trying to stop what they fear might be a large-scale assault, Parker and Amalia find themselves looking for a stolen painting that could help solve a 35-year-old crime.

Juggling two critical cases with far-reaching implications will require Parker and Amalia to summon every ounce of skill and resolve they possess. And when Parker is faced with a moral dilemma that could determine the fate of hundreds of people, how will he respond?

Featuring humor, pulse-pounding suspense, and plenty of hockey and pop culture references, this crime thriller set in New Hampshire from veteran journalist Dennis Pierce will keep readers engrossed until the very last page. If you’re a fan of Robert B. Parker’s Spenser series or relatable, underdog heroes in general, you won’t want to miss this book.”

Author:

“Dennis Pierce is a freelance writer, author, and journalist. A graduate of Yale University, he began his professional career as an education journalist with eSchool Media, working his way from assistant editor to managing editor and editor-in-chief. In his last few years with the company, he served as director of content partnerships, working with advertisers to develop and execute content marketing campaigns. He has covered congressional hearings on Capitol Hill, interviewed former astronauts and Secretaries of Education, and ghostwritten thought leadership articles for company CEOs.”

Appraisal:

This was a fun, enjoyable read. I always enjoy a good mystery that keeps me engrossed in the story, trying to figure out what the answer is along with the protagonists makes for a fun read. With two cases intertwined in this story there was plenty to keep the reader engaged.

One thing that stood out in this book and set it apart in a good way from many mysteries was the subtle humor that is scattered throughout the story. There might be some things that I missed because I wasn’t clued in to a subtle reference, but I caught some that I suspect others might not pick up on. For example, if you aren’t enough of a music nerd to recognize the name Charlie Sexton, you won’t giggle like I did at one reference. But you ought to still enjoy the mystery.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

Contains a minimal amount of adult language.

This is the second book in a series featuring Parker Hanson. However, each book is standalone.

Format/Typo Issues:

My review is based on an ARC (advance reviewer copy), so I can’t gauge the final product in this area.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 55-60,000 words

Tuesday, December 9, 2025

Review: Reunion Cruise by Maria A Palace


Genre: Thriller

Description:

“Margarita Kauzlaskas (a/k/a Margot), a beautiful immigrant girl from Lithuania, is determined to have it all, no matter who she has to use to get it. The result is a long list of enemies, including a jealous husband, a revengeful ex-wife, an obsessed girlfriend, and a star-crossed lover. After convincing her four best friends into taking a reunion cruise to Bermuda, on the night of the ship's return to New York, a body is spotted going overboard. The next morning, Margot is nowhere to be found.

Enter FBI Agent Richard Heller, whose early abandonment issues cause him to become obsessed with finding out what happened to the infamous femme fatale. As the investigation unfolds, an aura of foul play descends upon her friends as well as her enemies. With insufficient evidence to convict, the case grows cold––until he receives an anonymous envelope in the mail. Is it someone's idea of a joke, or can it help him solve the mystery once and for all?”

Author:

Born in the Republic of San Marino, an enclave in the Apennine Mountains of northern Italy and one of the smallest independent states in Europe, Maria Palace moved to the US at a young age. After a career and raising her family Maria retired from her job in the legal field and started writing. This is her second book.

Appraisal:

My thoughts on this book are all over the place. There are some things I liked a lot, the characters, the overall premise of the book, and to some degree the solving of the mystery. But there were some things that happened that I found questionable. The FBI agent did a few things that, while I’m not an attorney, I still recognized as clearly being illegal. One specific time was not long after he started his investigation when he basically broke into an office that he didn’t have a warrant to do. That’s not to say that every FBI agent always toes the line, but this struck me as unlikely to happen the way it was told. He did a couple other questionable things as the story progressed. If you’re able to suspend your disbelief in parts like this, there is a decent story here.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on an advance reviewer copy, so I can’t gauge the final product in this area.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 90-95,000 words

Friday, August 22, 2025

Review: The Regression Strain by Kevin Hwang


 Genre: Thriller.

Description:

“Dr. Peter Palma joins the medical team of the Paradise to treat passengers for minor ailments as the cruise ship sails across the Atlantic. But something foul is festering under the veneer of leisure. The brig fills with felons, the morgue with bodies, and the vacation becomes a nightmare.

Peter and his staff face a vile affliction that pits loved ones against each other and shatters the bonds of civil society.

With the ship hurtling towards an unprepared New York, only Peter can neutralize the threat, but he’s hallucinating and delirious.

And sometimes primal urges are impossible to resist.

The Regression Strain is a fast-paced, cerebral medical thriller that'll grab you from the first to the last page.”

Author:

“Kevin O. Hwang, MD, is a professor of internal medicine at McGovern Medical School at UTHealth Houston where he sees patients and teaches residents. His academic work has appeared in leading medical journals.”

Appraisal:

This was a fun read. Dr Palma, the doctor who is the protagonist of this story, thought being the doctor on a cruise ship would be much less stressful than his last job. It was a great theory, but turns out to be far from the reality of what he experiences in this little adventure he finds himself in. What was going to happen next and how it was going to work out in the end kept me engaged and guessing the whole way. A fun read.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

Some adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 65-90,000 words


Friday, August 15, 2025

Review: Dark Presence by John Turiano


 

Genre: Thriller/Paranormal

Description:

“It was never an easy life, but when Kimbra's best friend is killed it takes a bizarre turn for the worst. An old boyfriend is a suspect in the murder, but when she seeks the help of a psychic, another person winds up dead.

As Kimbra digs deeper, she suspects a connection with her job researching paranormal phenomena. An experimental drug giving people paranormal powers is being tested and it soon leads to terrifying consequences. Test subjects are sending signals telepathically, controlling their victims thoughts. The drug is causing people to change.

Someone is stalking Kimbra and killing the people around her. But who, and why? There is nowhere to run, nowhere to hide, and no one to trust. Dark Presence is one thriller you won't want to miss!”

Author:

The author of a few speculative fiction novels as well as a non-fiction camping guide, John Turiano lives in western New York with his wife.

Appraisal:

This story not only kept me on edge, but guessing where things were headed. What was going on and who or what was responsible would seem so obvious, and then something would change, I would realize my guess was wrong, and the answer would be a mystery again. The only thing that remained the same throughout was I was pulling for Kimbra to make it through this challenging time. All in all, a good read.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

A small amount of adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

Not quite enough proofing issues to impact my rating, but right on the edge of doing so.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 90-95,000 words

Friday, July 25, 2025

Review: The Last Beach Town by Deb Richardson-Moore

 


Genre: Thriller/Suspense

Description:

“Sloane Cheney has no intention of ever returning to the South Carolina island town where she grew up. She enjoys her life in the big city and teaching at the college there. The thought of revisiting the place where her mother deserted her family is too painful.

But when Aunt Millicent, town matriarch and owner of the family’s beachfront property, is murdered, Sloane must go back to sign off on the sale of the grand family home to developers. She soon finds that old friendships have shifted, as townspeople disagree over the development that would reshape their sleepy village. Sloane is directly in the line of fire, under suspicion by the police chief because of her inheritance and by her former neighbors who question her long absence.

With family members and old friends swirling treacherously around her, Sloane doesn’t know who to trust, especially after a nearly fatal accident in the beach house. She digs into her family’s history, uncovering new information about her mother’s disappearance. What she discovers raises questions: Was her aunt’s murder a simple case of greed? Or was it related to her mother’s long-ago vanishing?”

Author:

“Deb Richardson-Moore has worked as an award-winning newspaper journalist and as a pastor to homeless congregants. Her murder mysteries fall somewhere between cozies and gritty psychological thrillers and have twice been named finalists in Killer Nashville competitions.

Deb and her husband live in upstate South Carolina, where she enjoys gardening, volunteering, public speaking, and watching TV thrillers adapted from favorite books. She travels frequently to the beach.”

For more, check out her website.

Appraisal:

The dynamics that sometimes happen in small groups, whether family members or residents of a small town, can make for some interesting and entertaining stories. It can even be a bit of a mystery at times. We’ve definitely got all of that at work in this story. It seemed like just when I thought I might have a handle on how things were going to shake out and what the answer to the latest mystery was, that something else would happen or come to light making me question it. If you like suspense, this story is great read.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on an advanced reader copy and thus I can’t gauge the final product in this area.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 80-85,000 words

Monday, July 14, 2025

Reprise Review: The Last Deception by D.V. Berkom

 


Genre: Thriller

Description:

“In the Cold War, you knew who your friends and enemies were. In war today, there’s no difference.

Just when former assassin Leine Basso thinks she’s free from the business of murder and deception, a desperate call from a friend drags her back into the dark world of espionage and arms dealers.

Leine uncovers information that implicates a well-known Russian businessman in a horrendous deception that affects national security and could have global repercussions. It’s up to the former assassin to persuade the powers that be to ignore the obvious and trust her, or disregard the information and bring the world to the brink of a devastating war. Can she make it in time to warn them before The Last Deception?”

Author:

“DV Berkom is the USA Today best-selling author of two action-packed thriller series featuring strong female leads: Leine Basso and Kate Jones. Her love of creating resilient, kick-ass women characters stems from a lifelong addiction to reading spy novels, mysteries, and thrillers, and longing to find the female equivalent within those pages.”

Appraisal:

From book to book it’s hard to predict what kind of situation Leine Basso is going to find herself involved in. That she’s going to acquit herself well, dealing with whatever unexpected twists life throws at her, is the only predictable part of Leine’s life. In this latest installment of the series, Leine finds herself embroiled in a situation that, if it doesn’t go well, could have serious repercussions for much of the world.

As with any good story of this type, action was fast-paced. The reader is kept guessing at what’s going to happen next, and the tension is high. If you’re a thriller reader, especially if you like espionage or spy thrillers, The Last Deception is your kind of book.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

Some adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 70-75,000 words

Friday, May 30, 2025

Review: The Shanghai Assignment by Karl Andrews


 Genre: Thriller

Description:

This is apparently the first of a projected series of thrillers with John Moore as protagonist. I picked this book for review (from the many Big Al is sent) because Karl Andrews chose a name close to my heart for his protagonist: and I have long been fascinated by China, especially Shanghai, especially Shanghai between the two world wars, when it was up there with Berlin and Alexandria for glitter and excess, and a hotbed of espionage both before and after World War I. It is still possibly (apart from Hong Kong) the Chinese city with the most Western influences. Andrews is aware of this (as you can see below he has lived in Shanghai, and in Beijing) and draws his plot from one of these far flung connections. Like a good episode of ‘Law and Order’ on the telly, his story enjoys a number of twists and turns before the real reasons for the initial and subsequent crimes emerge. John Moore, journalist, has been sent to investigate the death of a young woman who was once his intern. The story opens like a flower from there on.

Author:

Andrews’ CV is succinct. It tells us he was born in London; has worked as a museum curator, a journalist, a content creator and a ghostwriter of twenty Amazon best-selling crime novels; and has lived in four countries and nine cities, including Beijing and Shanghai.

Appraisal:

Once this gets going it is an interesting – if occasionally brutal – read. Unfortunately, rather a lot of the early part of the book is spent describing Moore, the usual burned out journo, living in the backwoods, divorced and worrying about his daughter who has just started college. As almost all protagonists in crime and/or thriller books are this sort of person (only the gender varies), things could perhaps have moved on a bit faster.

Once we arrive in Shanghai  the pace begins to pick up. Information about Shanghai is largely interesting. Then Moore’s investigation hits a dead end, after which the pace really picks up as new clues are discovered and the novel gallops satisfying towards its conclusion.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

Some seriously violent murders and beatings. Moore (a middle-aged man) receives significant injuries which, IMHO should’ve hospitalised him for at least a week. But he (of course) rips out his IV, pulls on his Big Boy Pants and returns to the fray after a few hours.

Some of the events upon which the plot depends rely heavily on coincidence.

Format/Typo Issues:

Rather a lot. Unfortunately as well as typos, the errors are often the sort that had this reviewer wondering what the author was trying to say.

There are also lapses in continuity: eg Moore is there at Chinese New Year, in winter. Sometimes he is suitably cold, sometimes he seems completely oblivious to the subzero temperatures, then he remembers to mention the very inclement weather again, sometimes at length.

Rating: *** Three Stars

Reviewed by: Judi Moore

Approximate word count: 90-95,000 words

Sunday, March 23, 2025

Review: Only Ann Knows by Baird Smart


 

Genre: Thriller

Description:

“A Horrible Accident or Brilliantly Planned Social Statement

Ann Miller still grieves deeply five months after her son and only child was killed during the Virginia Tech mass shooting. A lifelong gun rights advocate, she works passionately as an executive for a gun rights organization, the American Rifle Society.

One morning, Miller opens an anonymous package containing an AK-47 assault rifle sent to her ARS department. Entering an executive boardroom to deliver the assault weapon to her boss during a departmental meeting, she sprays 50 bullets in a matter of seconds killing 13 of her colleagues.

Two FBI agents with vastly different personalities and investigative approaches lead the ultra-high-profile investigation to determine if the mass shooting was a horrible accident as Miller contends or a brilliantly planned and executed mass murder to bring worldwide attention to the destructive capability of automatic and semi-automatic weapons like killed her son. As the FBI's investigation fails to uncover evidence that Miller pre-planned the shooting, the ARS spins the mass shooting events to characterize Miller as a mentally ill woman hellbent on avenging her son's death.

Having killed everyone in the boardroom, Miller stands trial for 13 first-degree murders as both the perpetrator and only witness. A surprise piece of evidence surfaces at the end of the trial which renders a verdict but still leaves questions unanswered.”

Author:

Baird Smart grew up in Winnetka, Illinois, a northern suburb of Chicago before leaving for college and eventually working in the TV industry in Los Angeles and Chicago and later working as a real estate broker in the Chicago area. This is his first novel.

Appraisal:

There are some parts of this novel that I like a ton, while there are other aspects that bothered me every step of the way while reading it. You may or may not react the same.

Let’s get the bad out of the way first.

One of the things I look for in books self-published or published by a small press is whether it received adequate proofreading. If I take note of too many issues while reading a book I’ll mention it if I see more than a handful and if it exceeds a certain number (okay, 20 if you care for the exact amount) then I’ll knock my review down to 3 stars or less, depending on other aspects of the book. This book didn’t hit that second number, but it was pushing it. The vast majority of the issues I flagged were homonyms, saying deep-seeded when it should be deep-seated, or summery (an adjective describing something as summer-like) instead of summary. Not to mention the “right to bare assault weapons” which I guess means that people may or may not be able to carry (aka bear) arms, but they have the right to take the clothes or covering off of their firearms.

I also thought the author had a tendency to describe things in way too much detail and flowery language, burning way too many words on description that is much more detailed than is typically needed. (Yeah, sometimes I’m guilty of being too wordy myself.) A short example is describing a room as containing “30x48-inch break-room tables.” Does the size really matter? This example is minor, but there are a lot more examples of this kind of thing, like describing a video playing on a “seventy-two-inch, rear-screen projection television surrounded by a semi-circle cluster of white hair and shiny bald heads.” A little bit of this, at times, may help to set the scene, but it reached the point where my brain was constantly saying “get on with the story.”

In spite of the issues above, I thought the foundational story of Ann and what happened, a mystery for all involved for much of the book, was very good. I think those of a particular political leaning might like this more than others, but it should be thought provoking for all. I’m glad I gave this a read in spite of the issues I had with the execution of telling the story.

Buy now from:            Amazon US        Amazon UK

FYI:

Some adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

More proofreading issues than I like to see, but not quite enough to knock a star off due to this issue. See discussion in appraisal section for more details.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 80-85,000 words

Tuesday, March 11, 2025

Review: That Which May Destroy You by Abda Khan


 Genre: Mystery/Thriller

Description:

“The truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth…?

Miriam Hassan stands in the defendant’s dock at Birmingham Crown Court charged with the cold-blooded murder of her well-known, rich, charismatic husband Zaf, to which she pleads not guilty. However, nothing is straightforward.

There is conflicting witness testimony. The couple argued on the day in question, and Miriam was overheard threatening him. A witness places her at the scene of the crime. Miriam’s evidence casts doubt on her guilt, but no one can corroborate it.

It soon becomes apparent that both Zaf and the marriage were not as they seemed. Miriam discloses details about the ‘gaslighting’ and emotional abuse she suffered, and the court also discovers that Zaf in fact had a number of enemies. On the other hand, Miriam stands to inherit Zaf’s vast fortune if she walks free.

Through the moving testimony in the courtroom and dramatic flashbacks of the two-year marriage, the reader is taken on a gripping and thought-provoking journey, but when the shocking truth is finally revealed, the reader will be left with a moral question that may be difficult to answer.”

Author:

“Abda Khan is an award winning lawyer turned author. Her first novel Stained (2016) has been praised as the 'contemporary Tess of the d'Urbervilles' by Booklist (USA). Her novel Razia (2019), is a gripping story about a lawyer's fight for justice for a modern day slave. Khan's debut poetry collection, Losing Battles Winning Wars, is a thought-provoking journey through the challenges she has navigated as a first generation British Pakistani Muslim woman. Khan was Highly Commended in the Nat West Asian Women of Achievement Awards, 2017, and won British Muslim Woman of the Year at the British Muslim Awards 2019. Khan also teaches creative writing and produces and directs community based creative projects.”

Appraisal:

This was an interesting and thought-provoking book. The way it is structured with the timeline shifting back and forth from Miriam being in court on trial for murder and then shifting to her life leading up to this point kept the reader guessing and wondering what the story was. Did Miram kill her husband, Zaf? Maybe, maybe not. If she did, will she be able to show it was self defense or something else justifiable? Even if she should be found guilty based on the legal aspects, should she really? I suppose some people could fall on either side of the argument for most of the way and definitely when the story concludes the answer might not be clear. However, it will also get you thinking about cultures and religions (and no, I’m not talking about just Muslims as depicted here, but plenty of others) where misogyny is normalized and marriage that should be a partnership is expected by some to be a dictatorship. The results can be ugly.

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FYI:

Some adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

Review is based on an Advance Reader Copy, so I can’t gauge the final product in this area.

Rating: ***** Five Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 85-90,000 words

Monday, March 3, 2025

Review: Gold in Them Texas Hills by Russ Hall

 


Genre: Mystery/Thriller

Description:

“All that glitters is not good.

Al Quinn’s plans to live a quiet retired life are shattered when trespassers begin encroaching on his lakeside property at night with flashlights and a metal detector.

First, there are two men, then four, then six showing up almost every evening on Al’s land. Some of them are armed and willing to fire their weapons. Al has no idea what’s motivating the unwelcome visitors. But they soon realize their lives are being threatened by some dangerous men.

Sheriff Clayton makes matters worse by asking for Al’s help on a different matter. With an election coming, two women are getting ready to claim that thirty years ago, Clayton went too far with them when they were underage Girl Scouts. Clayton swears he’s innocent, so Al agrees to look into the situation.”

Author:

The winner of multiple awards, Russ Hall has more than twenty published books that include mysteries, thrillers, westerns, poetry, and nonfiction. Hall lives near Austin, Texas.

Appraisal:

I’ve read multiple books in the Al Quinn series and like the characters. Yeah, that the star and I share a name (not to mention his infant nephew, Little Al), so that might give him an advantage in winning me over. But I’m always eager to see what their latest adventures are. Having spent a bit of time in Austin over the years I also enjoy how when Al mentions he’s in a certain part of town and what its like, I can easily picture it, knowing for example that the southeast near the airport isn’t a great area or picturing the area to the northwest of the city where Al Quinn’s family lives takes me right there.

But along with the setting and the characters we also have the story, what’s happening to the characters in the setting. Who was doing what was mostly not a mystery to the reader, we knew that most of the way for the big mystery, who are the armed men that keep sneaking onto Al’s property and why were they doing this. But how it is going to turn out kept me involved. There was a bit of a mystery around Sheriff Clayton and whether Al would be able to prove what the Sheriff was being accused of was untrue, but even there we knew the answer and so there was more thriller than mystery. However, not knowing how it was going to shake out and whether Al and his family was going to get through it all okay, really pulled me into the story. Even among the bad guys, who we get to know and understand a bit, there are some the reader isn’t going to view in the same light as others, so you’re pulling for some to pay a larger price than others. It all makes for an intense and interesting read and makes me eager for the eleventh book in the series to see what Al and crew are up to next.

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Format/Typo Issues:

Although the version I read was an advance reviewer copy and I can’t judge the final product in this area, I found no significant issues in the reviewer version.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 55=60,000 words