Showing posts with label Paranormal Suspense. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Paranormal Suspense. Show all posts

Wednesday, December 26, 2018

Review: The Other Side of Elsewhere by Brett McKay



Genre: Paranormal/Suspense

Description:

“Ret McCoy was always the new kid, but after three years in the small town of Riverton, he thinks his family may have finally settled. He and his friends have the perfect summer planned before they start seventh grade, and his new job at the local mortuary promises enough pocket money for all the sodas they can drink.

A dare from an older boy quickly ruins their plans. Everyone knows to stay away from the Crooked House, but after Ret and his friends take on the dare to spend the night in the abandoned house, they become caught up in the house’s dark history.

Later, an outsider buys the house. When people start to disappear, Ret is determined to solve the mystery before it swallows the entire town. His obsession with the Crooked House and its strange new owner threatens to put him and his friends in danger more terrifying than anything they could have imagined.”

Author:

“When Brett McKay is not conjuring demons and bloodthirsty psychopaths to put on paper, he sells landscaping. He loves all types of music, but hard rock and heavy metal fuel him the most. He enjoys the outdoors, spending time with friends and family, and curling up in front of a good movie with his wife and a bucket of popcorn.

Brett lives in Utah with his wife and two sons. Fall is his favorite time of year because he gets to decorate his house for Halloween much too early for his neighbors.”

Appraisal:

For me The Other Side of Elsewhere had two levels. The first, higher level, is one that potential readers with comparable tastes are likely going to experience much the same. The second level is one that very few will connect with in the same way as I did. It’s at a much more detailed and personal level. Whether it is positive, negative, or even something that registers will vary by reader. I’ll try to explain.

At the high level this is a paranormal suspense or thriller novel. The protagonist is a twelve year-old boy and I don’t think it would be a stretch to call it a coming of age story as well. If when the story takes place is ever spelled out, I missed it, but there are subtle clues that would lead me to believe anytime in the period from the 70s to the early 80s would be a reasonable assumption. This could and I think would appeal to a wide range of ages, from young adult to a not-at-all-young adult who might have been coming of age when the story takes place. While the story isn’t happening in current times I think regardless of when you were 12, whether a couple years ago or several decades, you’ll be able to relate to Ret, the protagonist in the story. (Girls, might not see themselves in Ret, but they’ll surely see their brother or some other boy they knew.)

For me, much of this story, both in the behavior of Ret and his friends as well as the environment and culture of their hometown, were just like where I lived at twelve. In fact, Ret’s hometown is a real town in Utah, about 50 miles from where I grew up in the same period the story took place. I found myself nodding my head at something specific thinking that the author had it just right. But a few times I’d stop nodding and start wondering how the average reader would react. Would they understand the specific? Not likely. But maybe they’d get a sense for what was being said without understanding. Some of these things were terminology specific to the religion that dominates Utah like Primary (religious instruction for younger children) or Relief Society (a women’s organization within the Mormon church). Others weren’t religious, but still Utah specific, like a reference to the Dee Burger Clown (the “mascot” for a long-defunct fast food chain). I think these things were infrequent enough to not be a serious issue for those who don’t understand the reference. For those who do, it makes the story that much more credible and authentic.

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Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.

Rating: **** Four Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 65-70,000 words
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Thursday, January 16, 2014

Don't Kill The Messenger / Joel Pierson


Reviewed by: Pete Barber

Genre: Paranormal Suspense

Approximate word count: 50-55,000 words

Availability    
Kindle  US: YES  UK: YES  Nook: YES  Smashwords: NO Paper: YES
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Author:

“Joel Pierson is the author of numerous award-winning plays for audio
and stage, including French Quarter, The Children's Zoo, The Vigil, Cow
Tipping
, and Mourning Lori. He also co-authored the novelization
of French Quarter. How he has time to write is anyone's guess, as he
spends his days as editorial manager at the world's largest print-on-demand
publishing company. Additionally, he is artistic director of
Mind's Ear Audio Productions, the producers of several popular audio
theatre titles and the official audio guided tour of Arlington National
Cemetery. If that weren't enough, he also writes for the newspaper and
a local lifestyles magazine in his hometown of Bloomington, Indiana.
He stays grounded and relatively sane with the help of his wife (and
frequent co-author) Dana, and his three ridiculously loving dogs.”

Description:

For a number of years, Tristan has been receiving psychic messages accompanied by great physical pain. The pain continues until he follows the directions he’s given (under a time constraint), which lead him to a place of impending doom for some victim. His job is to warn the victim so they can save themselves if they choose.

Appraisal:

The premise is an interesting one, offering the author the chance to include diverse scenes and characters (because the ‘message’ can be about anyone). This kept the action fresh and the situations interesting. 

The writing is light and easy on the eye. The character, Tristan, is likeable, often amusing. The story focuses on one of the ‘victims’ he’s sent to save, Rebecca, who he finds working in a Florida strip club. She’s also a well-drawn character and the interaction between her and Tristan is well executed. The story basically follows their journey—physically, spiritually and romantically.

The end was a little disappointing. A tad too much ‘deus’ was needed to tie off the threads, and the true nature of Tristan’s psychic mission isn’t revealed. Future installments are planned, so that’s probably why.

All in all, a fun fast read.

Format/Typo Issues:

No typos. One sex scene—nicely done, not too graphic, but neither is it YA-suitable.


Rating: **** Four stars