Sunday, July 5, 2026

Review: One More For The Ditch by Eric McLaughlin

 


Genre: Absurdist Fiction

Description:

“One More for the Ditch is a savage, darkly comic triptych about collapse, cancellation, and the violent search for meaning in a culture addicted to outrage. Moving between addiction, grief, satire, and rebellion, the book asks what, if anything, is worth worshiping when institutions fail, morality fractures, and survival itself becomes an act of defiance.”

Author:

Information about the author is limited, but this appears to be his first full length book with short stories being featured in multiple venues prior. He has a substack site that you can check out if you’d like.

Appraisal:

I feel like I could write a novel on my reactions about this book which range from the extremely negative to the extremely positive. I’ll try to cut my review down to at least novella length or even a short story. We’ll see how I do.

About fifteen years ago when I first started writing reviews of most of the books I read, focusing on indie (both self-published and extremely small press) publications that were starting to get attention among Kindle owners, one of the claims I saw from my fellow readers was that the proofreading was lacking in these books. While it wasn’t unusual to see a handful of proofing misses in a book, even those published by the large traditional publishers, I didn’t often see serious issues regardless of how they were published, but sometimes it happened. I came up with a threshold of a number of errors I needed to flag while reading a book where I would mention that it had proofing issues and an even higher number where I would start deducting stars based on the proofing misses. This book exceeded that second threshold by more than 4 times and of the close to a thousand books I’ve gauged using this criteria this has, by far, the worst proofreading of any. In fact, it feels like the book could have been written using speech to text and then the generated text was published without even looking at it based on a lot of the errors I saw, like constantly confusing the words passed and past or saying shes instead of she’s with apostrophes missing from words where they should be. If this kind of thing bothers you, this book will drive you crazy.

The content itself, if you ignore the above, I liked much better. The title says it is a “triptych” which is usually used for a work of art that has three pieces. This has three parts to it with different sections that are different, yet still tie together in many ways. Amazon has this classified as absurdist fiction which Wikipedia describes by saying that “common elements in absurdist fiction include satire, dark humor, incongruity, the abasement of reason, and controversy regarding the philosophical condition of being ‘nothing’.” That gives a pretty good idea of the story (okay, make that stories) that you’ll find here. In some ways it felt dystopian, but felt like it was showing us what today’s world could be headed for if we continue on our current path. I love books that get me thinking and looking at the world from different angles. This does that. If I wasn’t constantly having to interpret and correct in my head for all the proofing issues, I’d have enjoyed it a whole lot more.

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FYI:

Some adult language

Format/Typo Issues:

Proofreading, if it happened, was atrocious as discussed in the appraisal section.

Rating: ** Two Stars

Reviewed by: BigAl

Approximate word count: 75-80,000 words

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