Tuesday, June 10, 2014

The Length and Breath of a Name, a guest post by J. Leigh, author of Tangled Paths

crafting character personalities based on the meanings of names


Being a writer and reader, people often give you interesting books. Thus was the unique tome bestowed upon me by my mother a few years ago: a book about deciphering the 'hidden, mystical and spiritual depth within names'. It was quirky thing, thick with names and even thicker with their supposed meanings, drawing from cultures, numerology and runic traditions, respectively. I recall flipping through it, and upon finding my own name, was very unimpressed with the description of my personality based on my name's 'vibrational resonance'--the concept that the sound of the pronunciation of a name can shape your traits. And so I placed it up on my bookshelf between two other dry anthologies to be forgotten.

Fast forward a few years later, when I was doing the early, early stage notes of Tangled Paths, before the book had a title or a whole plot, and I was fussing over the cast. The main character, Jathen, was pretty much fleshed out by then, along with Hatori and Jephue and a few others. I was mulling over the secondary characters with another writer friend of mine who was staying for the weekend, when on the way back to the living room from a bathroom run, she stumbled across my 'meaning of names' book.

I immediately dismissed her suggestion to use it as a jumping off point, as all the names within were relatively common ones, and I had a code of honor with regard to fantasy worlds having fantasy names. "Well, there are instructions in the back," she said, flipping through. "Of how to decipher a name that’s not in the book, or one you've made-up." As I was still not convinced, she set out to try and determine the meaning behind the name 'Jathen', just to prove to me it had some merit.

Her conclusions left me stunned.

The description she managed to piece together was Jathen's personality in a nut shell, and was so accurate to the character and the ultimate destiny I'd crafted for him, that I later included a refined version of it in a scene in Tangled Paths.

However, in that immediate moment, I wasn't quite convinced. While I am always open to the possibilities of things beyond our keen being out there, (as Shakespeare wrote, “There are more things in Heaven and Earth, Horatio, than are dreamt of in your philosophy.”) my natural starting point is always that of the skeptic. So thinking it was a fluke, or that perhaps our discussion of the character previously had lent itself to her conclusions, I presented her with another fantasy name I'd made-up. One of a character I had yet to unveil to her, but had already fleshed out the personality.

Again, the description was nothing short of uncanny.

Four hours later, after interpreting nearly a dozen of my long-term characters, my friend's unusual name, and my nickname (which, I discovered, fit my personality to a tee, unlike my 'real' name, which is not often used) I was completely, and utterly, hooked. The concept of names having an effect on shaping a person's personality became a linchpin in Way Walker culture, and shaped an entire aspect of their magical system, that of vibrational resonance.  I might have scoffed at it before, but now, well, it was the stuff of good books.

Yet, I couldn't bring myself to just lean entirely upon one resource. With the shape-shifting dragon culture of the Tazu that Jathen belonged to, I put my own additional spin on the idea, taking the mystical properties said to be in gemstones and working that into Tazu naming. It was a very useful tool, as it allowed me to fashion not only their basic personalities, but also the draconic colors and markings off of their gemstone names. Jathen's mother, for example, Rhodonith, was fashioned after the gemstone rhodonite, which in addition to being black and pink like Rhod's scales, also claimed to endow the wearer with "emotional balance that is said to nurture love as well as encourage the brotherhood of humanity; the ability to show both sides of an issue to assist in being more clear about coming to a conclusion in any disagreement." It's also said to be a stone of "unconditional love". All these qualities seemed to well-suit the protective mother and queen, and thus is why I choose the name for her.

However, in the case of a more antagonistic character like the guard captain Skaniss, I wanted him to be a 'flawed' version of the positive gemstone qualities. So I chose the stone skan, which is supposed to help a person think before they speak, and eliminate misconceptions and judgmental-ness. (Which, if you read the book, you'll discover this takes on an almost ironic quality for the character.) Since its inception, I've used this method to name almost every single Tazu in Tangled Paths.

In the end it's become a fun, fascinating way to help shape even the most secondary of characters, and has been great to enhance and refine main characters with personality quirks and facets that wouldn't readily spring to mind.

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Monday, June 9, 2014

Midnight Caller / Haley Whitehall


Reviewed by: Sooz

Genre: Historical Romance/Erotica

Approximate word count: 25,000-30,000 words

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Author:

Haley Whitehall enjoys writing historical fiction. She earned a BA from Central Washington University, and has a love for the Civil War. You can learn more about her on her website.

Description:

Emma has become a widow at a young age, but doesn’t mourn the loss of her husband who she did not love. When she comes out of mourning, she yearns for companionship and hires Frederick, a roustabout to come to her home at night. The two have an instant attraction, but there are greater forces at work to keep them apart.

Appraisal:

Midnight Caller is a short, steamy read – a book that could certainly be finished in one day.

The pairing of Emma, a white widow, and Frederick, a black roustabout, in the 1866 Louisiana seems plausible. There is a strong undercurrent of racism, which plays a role in bringing the two lovers even closer together. They both know if they are caught, it will only lead to trouble, but their love and lust is so strong that they need each other.

There is a bit of suspense involved as Emma has to deal with an unwanted and dangerous suitor. She has her own secret, though, that pushed her into a loveless marriage before and she will try to use her secret instead to find love.

Romance and erotica fans should enjoy Midnight Caller. It provides a quick hit for a pleasurable afternoon read on forbidden love.

FYI:

Sexual content.

Format/Typo Issues:

No issues.


Rating: **** Four stars

Sunday, June 8, 2014

The Redesign of Tomorrowland / L.N. Smith


Reviewed by: BigAl

Genre: Literary Fiction

Approximate word count: 15-20,000 words

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Author:

Information about the author, L.N. “Bert” Smith is skimpy other than he has two other books available, Sunrise Over Disney (which appears to share some aspects of this book) and The Evolution of Human Intellect which, hard as it may to believe, also does as “the material is presented in the form of two amusement park attractions.”

Description:

"The world of tomorrow exists today, but only for those who can spot the true experts."

“And never before in human history has it been so crucial to spot these experts sooner rather than later. ... You see, ‘progress’ is accelerating---our technological advance is rocketing toward a flashpoint of alarming and breathtaking change. People need to recognize what is happening and take action before it's too late. ... But can they? A legion of false experts stand in their way.”

Appraisal:

I’m not sure what to make of this book starting with the most basic (what genre is it) and continuing on to the actual content.  The author calls it literary fiction, but it could just as easily be called science fiction, speculative fiction, maybe even fantasy, although it doesn’t fit what a reader would expect to find in any of those all that well either. I think there is even a case to be made for calling it non-fiction (not 100% of every non-fiction book is literally true, right?)

The premise is that the author has “redesigned” Tomorrowland at one of the Disney properties with rides, shows, and other attractions that show or teach us about where the world is headed, at least in the opinion of various experts or the author’s interpretation of them. At various points a “ride” covers different topics in science, technology, and politics.

The goal, as I’ve interpreted it, is to provide an easy introduction or exposure to ideas and concepts that most people need to understand better, and whet their appetite. Maybe even inspire them to investigate more, prepare for the changes, and possibly take action to encourage a change in course. The goal is laudable, but the execution didn’t work for me. The plot device of the redesigned Tomorrowland felt forced much of the time and too often got in the way of understanding the point the author seemed to be trying to make.

Using fiction to provoke thought and possibly inspire people to reconsider the direction the world is heading as part of a story is nothing new and if done well can have a positive effect. (Orwell’s 1984 is one obvious example.) But in The Redesign of Tomorrowland, there isn’t really much of a story. Ultimately, what fiction was here only served to obscure the facts, while doing little to make the learning more palatable.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.


Rating: *** Three Stars

Saturday, June 7, 2014

Blueblood / Matthew Iden


Reviewed by: BigAl

Genre: Mystery/Police Procedural

Approximate word count: 65-70,000 words

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Author:

Matthew Iden has published several novels in multiple genres. The first book in his Marty Singer Mystery series was a nominee in the 2014 BigAl’s Books and Pals Readers’ Choice awards. A globe trotter who has traveled almost pole to pole (Iceland to Antarctia), Iden currently makes his home in Virginia.

For more, visit the author’s website.

Description:

“Four unrelated murders. Nothing special in Washington DC. Not even good enough to make the evening news. But then a concerned police lieutenant approaches retired homicide detective Marty Singer with a simple fact that changes everything.

They were all cops.”

Appraisal:

For being retired, Marty Singer is sure staying busy. With his Marty Singer character, Matthew Iden has a detective that will appeal to police procedural fans but  is more complex than most in this genre. By virtue of being retired and his investigations being unofficial or off the books, Iden has a bit more leeway in what Singer can get away with while remaining credible. That his cases are not just doing his job seems to draw me in, getting me more invested in Marty’s cases, too.

As with the first of this series, I found this installment to be well written with a gripping plot, plenty of tension, and lots of mystery. Sometimes there was even a touch of humor, as in these lines:

I hung back to make room for a trio of twenty-something girls to pass, their eyes glittering with the prospect of shopping. It was never a good idea to get between a predator and her prey.

Blueblood should appeal to fans of police procedurals and anyone who likes a good mystery.

FYI:

Although the second book in the series and having read the first book gives some history and backstory that adds to the enjoyment of reading this book, Blueblood could be read as a standalone.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.


Rating: ***** Five Stars

Friday, June 6, 2014

Hang a Crooked Number / Matthew Callan


Reviewed by: Sooz

Genre: Thriller

Approximate word count: 105,000-110,000 words

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Author:

Matthew Callan writes about baseball for the Amazin’ Avenues, Baseball Prospectus, The Awl and other publications. He received an MFA in fiction from Brooklyn College. You can learn more about Callan and his work at his website.

Description:

Is baseball really a spy game? In Hang a Crooked Number it is. Backstop is a minor league catcher whose world is falling apart. He can hit, he can’t eat, and his best friend goes missing. Yet it seems as though he can’t do anything about any of his problems – until The Scouts, a faction of old-school spies, wrap him up in a conspiracy that he has to figure out.

Appraisal:

I purposely picked Hang a Crooked Number because I’m a huge baseball fan. When selecting the book, I really didn’t know anything more than baseball was involved, and yet it was not what I expected.

Backstop – the main character’s handle – is a spy that is part of an agency that uses baseball to gather intelligence. Baseball is not just an American sport anymore but has become popular in other parts of the world such as Asia and Latin America. This Society can send baseball players to these locations rather easily.

Could this happen? Why not? It’s not out of the realm of possibility, which is what made the premise of the book intriguing.

We don’t learn too much about The Society. It’s been operating for many years and some baseball players have been part of covert operations on barnstorming tours overseas. Not many people in the government even know about the clandestine operation. Instead, there are many secrets, lots of mistrust and Backstop finds himself in the middle of all of it with no idea where to turn.

Baseball fans should enjoy this book. It takes sabremetrics to a whole new level where the spies use the advanced statistics to ensure their place in the game.

While I enjoyed the book, I did have a few issues with it. At times, it felt as though author Matthew Callen overwrote. The description, the backstories were a bit too much. This could have been cut down with tighter sentences.

I was also unsatisfied with the way it wrapped up – or felt as though it didn’t really wrap up. There were some answers, but Backstop was just given the run around and was essentially a pawn in a much bigger problem. Throughout the whole book, he was constantly told what his handlers and other spies wanted him know to get him to play their game. Backstop was often a bystander in his own life and we had to watch.

In a way, I felt bad for Backstop. While he got to play baseball with the hopes of making the Majors, it didn’t really seem as though the work he did for the spy agency was very important to The Society as a whole but just a few people with a vendetta.

Format/Typo Issues:

No major issues.


Rating: ***Three Stars

Thursday, June 5, 2014

Binds That Tie / Kate Moretti


Reviewed by: BigAl

Genre: Thriller/Women’s Fiction

Approximate word count: 85-90,000 words

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Author:

A scientist in the pharmaceutical industry and an avid reader all her life, Kate Moretti lives with her family in Pennsylvania. This is Moretti’s second book. Her first, Thought I Knew You, beat all comers in the chick-lit category of the inaugural 2013 Books and Pals Readers’Choice Awards and recently hit both the New York Times and USA Today bestseller lists. 

For more, visit Moretti’s website.

Description:

“Love ties. Murder binds.

Maggie never felt as though she belonged until Chris Stevens showed her what true happiness meant. Ten years into their marriage, miscarriages and infidelities have scarred them both. Despite their perfect-couple image, Maggie can’t look at Chris with anything but resentment. When a charismatic stranger offers the opportunity for a little harmless flirtation, she jumps into the game.

But charm soon turns to malice, and a deadly split-second decision forces Maggie and Chris onto a dangerous path fraught with secrets, lies, and guilt. With no one else to turn to—no one she dares trust—Maggie will ultimately learn just how binding marital ties can be.”

Appraisal:

Wow. What a ride.

Thrillers are often described as plot driven because the plot is the most important part of the story. Character development matters, but not as much as in other genres. Binds That Tie almost felt character driven, yet was still clearly a thriller. The main characters, Chris and Maggie Stevens, along with some of the more important second-tier players, have current problems, past histories, and a few skeletons that have been shoved into the dusty corner of the closet. The characters are complex and their characteristics, especially their past, drives the story more than in the typical thriller.

The twists and turns of the story kept me guessing as events start to spiral out of control and just get worse and worse. I couldn’t figure out what was going to happen or what I wanted to happen as I struggled with some questions. When is the right thing wrong, and really, what is the right thing here?

FYI:

Adult language.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.


Rating: ***** Five Stars

Wednesday, June 4, 2014

Homicide Chart / V.S. Kemanis


Reviewed by: BigAl

Genre: Legal Thriller

Approximate word count: 95-100,000 words

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Author:

An ex-California girl, V.S. Kemanis is now a New York based attorney. In addition to the prior Dana Hargrove legal mystery, she has three collections of short stories available.

For more, visit the author’s website.

Description:

“Prosecutor Dana Hargrove has left those rookie days of Thursday’s List far behind. It’s 1994, and the murder rate in New York City is sky high. Dana belongs to an elite cadre of prosecutors on the “homicide chart,” that 24/7 roster of on-call responders to murder scenes. Her next turn on the chart comes at a bad time, during an exhausting week of courtroom battles. A surprise witness of dubious credibility has surfaced, threatening to undermine her recently-won murder conviction against a reputed gang member. Back on the chart, Dana receives a call in the middle of the night, plunging her into a new murder investigation that hits dangerously close to home—a case that will change her life forever.”

Appraisal:

The first Dana Hargrove book, Thursday’s List, took place in the ‘80s. In Homicide Chart the timeline moves up several years, 1994 to be exact. Dana has a lot more experience as a prosecutor, not to mention the additional responsibility and pressure from a caseload made up of murder prosecutions. To top it off, she now has a young son whose care she juggles with the help of her husband and a nanny.

This story focuses on two homicide cases, one with a gang member already on trial and another where Dana has a personal stake. With a couple minor exceptions (a detour for some unneeded backstory on a minor character and unneeded repeating of some additional backstory regarding Dana’s mother-in-law), the story is well written. There was plenty of mystery and intrigue that kept me guessing how the two cases would resolve. A worthwhile read that left me eager to see what comes next for Dana.

Format/Typo Issues:

No significant issues.


Rating: **** Four Stars

Tuesday, June 3, 2014

Far Out / Fiona Faith Ross


Reviewed by: Sooz

Genre: Science Fiction/Dystopian

Approximate word count: 60-65,000 words

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Author:

Fiona Faith Ross is an English teacher with an interest in science and technology. She lives in the UK.

Description:

Saffron has to figure out how to live in the Seawood Slum without going crazy. She takes care of her father and friends. But when her father stays out longer than he intends on one of his mysterious trips, he misses the patrol check-in, which sets in motion a life Saffron never imagined.

Appraisal:

The future never looks bright. There is a huge gap between the have and have-nots, life is a struggle with a constant surveillance to ensure you're following the rules. 

But ... but there is always some semblance of hope. 

Far Out is another book that takes place in a dystopian future. Problems arose from issues with genetically modified food and overpopulation where the world’s economy collapsed. Now, herbal studies is one of the great careers as the earth slowly becomes sustainable again.

Saffron is the main character. She worries about her father who seems to leave for days at a time while on a secret mission. She doesn't ask too many questions because she wants to have plausible deniability if the patrol ever finds out. 

Saffron soon learns there is whole world out there that is working against the machines -- oh, I forgot to mention that machines tend to rule with humans following their whims. Man vs. machine -- another common theme found in Far Out. 

The book, however, focuses on Saffron's growth. She's 17 years old and at a crossroads in life. She has spent her life taking care of her father and those around her without giving much thought to herself. It's apparent early on when she gets a dog and would sooner give the puppy the last of the food without eating anything for herself. 

But like many teenagers, she suffers from rash and impulsive feelings. As Saffron realizes the world is bigger and badder than the slum she is living in, her views tend to change. Life isn't just about her anymore, but finding people who might make the world a bit brighter, including friends and lovers.

Even in a dystopian world, Saffron can find some joy as she learns about life and love through family and new friends.

Format/Typo Issues:

No issues.


Rating: ****Four Stars

Monday, June 2, 2014

The Picture of Cool / Laurie Boris


Reviewed by: BigAl

Genre: Contemporary Romance

Approximate word count: 10-15,000 words

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Author:

Author of four novels and a two time winner in Books and Pals Readers’ Choice Awards, Laurie Boris lives with her husband in the Hudson Valley of New York. She is also a contributing writer and editor for IndiesUnlimited.

For more, visit Boris’ website.

Description:

“Television producer Charlie Trager spends his days working with beautiful women on a daytime talk show. But underneath his cool façade, there’s a hollow spot in his heart, waiting for the right man to ease his loneliness. Then he meets the show’s next guest, a handsome young politician with a bad case of nerves—and a secret that could turn both their lives upside down.”

Appraisal:

The Picture of Cool reads much like a contemporary romance novel. It has the same story arc as a typical romance with two minor differences. The first is that the ending is nontraditional although not so far off as to be unsatisfying to romance fans. The second is that rather than a hero and heroine it has two heroes.

The second contributes to some of the complications not found in a typical romance. However, this is a fun story that should appeal to open-minded romance readers in many of the same ways as a girl meets boy romance would.

FYI:

A small amount of adult language and mild sexual situations.

Format/Typo Issues:

No issues.


Rating: ***** Five Star

Sunday, June 1, 2014

The Ohana / CW Schutter


Reviewed by: BigAl

Genre: Historical Fiction

Approximate word count: 100-105,000 words

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Author:

Born in Hawaii, CW Schutter now lives in the mountains of Colorado. She’s written two previous novels, Dragon Downs and School of Shadows, the second a nominee in the BigAl’s Books and Pals 2014 Readers’ Choice Awards in the paranormal romance category. Schutter is also a screenwriter with one made movie among her credits.

For more visit her website or blog.

Description:

“The Ohana is a riveting retrospective of the social, political, and economic history of Hawaii told through a historical family saga spanning three unforgettable generations. From the young Korean, Han Chaul Roong, who murders the hated Japanese invaders who kidnap his sister and force her into prostitution, to the Japanese aristocrat Kazuko who abandons her life of wealth and privilege to live in poverty with the servant she loves, the Asians came to work the brutal cane fields of Hawaii under Patrick O'Malley, a refugee from the Irish famine who sailed on a coffin ship to the gang-infested streets of Boston and ended up in Hawaii.”

Appraisal:

The Ohana (ohana means family in Hawaiian) is just what the description claims, a story of a family entwined with “the social, political, and economic history of Hawaii.” The family has branches originating from varied backgrounds and cultures. The story spans a time that was rife with cultural change and upheaval for all of the US. I suspect this change was more extreme for Hawaii with multiple waves of immigration as well as changes brought about from becoming a territory of the US not long before the tale starts. The story was compelling and the backdrop was just as interesting.

However, I also found myself struggling at times with the dialog of some characters who used convoluted syntax and while I could intuit what they were saying, it also didn’t make for smooth reading, as in this snippet of dialogue.

“’Sorry, brah,” Moki patted his back. “Da Silva don’ believe in letting anyone go for nothing. So he when show you what he can do. He when do that with his left hand. Pretty good, ‘ey?”

I interpreted examples such as these as done on purpose, a non-error. The number of actual grammatical and other proofing issues outside of dialogue was higher than I like to see, but not excessive. Combined, the two made for sometimes rough reading, but not enough to abandon a story I wanted to see through to the end.

Format/Typo Issues:

A small number of proofing errors.


Rating: *** Three Stars